Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs Poet Rhyme

Peace In Your Soul

There's nothing like peace in the midst of a storm, it's like a blanket on a cold day to help keep us warm.   when your soul and mind are in perfect peace It give us a feeling of such great release.   Like floating on a soft cloud up above, the peace only God gives because of his unconditional love.  Without His peace we would all be lost, so we thank Him for the peace He gives us without cost.

We can't have peace if we hold onto A life long grudge.  Because it keeps us from growing and being open to love.  Forgiveness is the key to healthy living, we struggle with an unhappy soul  if we continue to harbor unforgiving.  Regardless of what the other person has done, we must forgive and let go in order for our battle to be won.

Be in control of your on destiny,  be determined to get yourself free.  Live a happy and healthy life, and keep yourself free of pain and strife.




2/27/15

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Old Buck October 29, 2015 at 6:49 PM Gwen: Very good advice and nicely written. Keep on "proclaiming" truth. oldbuck Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs November 1, 2015 at 9:09 AM Thanks, I will do just that.

Chris Witherspoon August 7, 2015 at 1:07 PM Amen! Great write!! Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs August 7, 2015 at 1:16 PM Thanks

John Posey May 30, 2015 at 9:51 PM Great wisdom shown in this write, Gwen. I thoroughly agree with all your rhyming observations..... Love Ya.....Jake Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs May 31, 2015 at 8:45 AM Thank you so much sir, much love to ya!

Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2015 at 12:06 PM Gwen:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((regarding the bottom reply)) Always ~LINDA~

Teddy Kimathi March 7, 2015 at 8:24 AM a unique take in arrangement of your verses... Congrats for your WIN Gwen!!! ^_^ Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 15, 2015 at 3:41 PM Thanks Teddy appreciate your response.

Poet Destroyer A March 6, 2015 at 2:45 AM a nice win ...Linda Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 15, 2015 at 3:42 PM Thank you Linda : )

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty March 6, 2015 at 12:40 AM Congrats on your win Gwen. Love>>>rajat Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 15, 2015 at 3:43 PM Thanks Rajat : )

Jan Allison March 5, 2015 at 12:11 PM Beautiful rhyme I especially loved the final stanza - great advice:-) Hugs Jan xx Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 15, 2015 at 3:44 PM Thanks Jan, I appreciate you. : )

Shadow Hamilton March 5, 2015 at 7:35 AM great rhyme Gwen you would have placed higher if you had done it in poetical verses instead of it being almost narrative congrats on placing hugs Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 15, 2015 at 3:45 PM Thanks Shadow.

Njeri Hunjeri February 27, 2015 at 1:58 PM This is very good advice. Thank you! Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs March 15, 2015 at 3:45 PM Thank you njeri. : )