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Peace And Peacelessness

Caressing breeze should turn into tempest. And clear off all dust and dirt of nature. Though buds and blossoms might feel embarrassed Shouldn't time-twirls whirl each legislature? I have come to fight for each other's rights. Should one curl on riches and others starve? Should cutthroat competitions reach their heights? Shouldn't each being find what they deserve? Parents and children must clash on concepts. Young ones must question all age-old rites. Unrest must last till grace fills all precepts. Shouldn't spirit fill all empty, dark nights? Cast fire on earth, you said. Let it blaze. Let each creature know the almighty's ways!

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Date: 1/18/2025 6:50:00 PM
Another well written sonnet... this one calling for justice and change, urging transformation and unity, while challenging old norms and embracing the power of collective grace and enlightenment. It's obvious you enjoy the sonnet style and your theme choices appear to follow your namesake, Christuraj. It's my favorite style of poetry and you script them well.
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Date: 1/5/2025 8:09:00 PM
I agree! Your sonnets are thought-provoking.
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Date: 1/3/2025 11:42:00 PM
An enlightenment poem with important questions! I like how you put this together!
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