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Peace

Like sounds Of dew on grass Descended the dense dusk The flock of black geese returned home White peace _______________________________________ 28 May 2017 for John Anderson's Cinquain Express Train Contest

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Date: 10/9/2017 9:40:00 PM
Such a vivid cinquain Probir. Your poem is alive with delicate and splendid imagery. 'Like sounds of dew on grass' - pure poetic bliss for my senses... I completely enjoyed your poem this evening!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/10/2017 8:28:00 AM
Thank you, Susan ... I am honoured ...
Date: 6/6/2017 8:31:00 PM
Its beautifully serene.In nature rests peace. Its rendering is flawless. Kindly tell me what qualities are required for apoem to be POTD .my e-mail id is talwar_amber@yahoo.in Thank u!
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Date: 6/8/2017 12:53:00 AM
Thank you, Bawa ... Easier to write a poem than to say how to write ... Can't you talk to me over WhatsApp ... My no +91 9836697224
Date: 6/5/2017 3:36:00 PM
Very graceful Cinquain, Probir. The poem delivers on it's title. Serene and peaceful imagery. Beautiful poetry, my friend. Love and peace always.
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Date: 6/5/2017 11:49:00 PM
Thank you, Freddie ...
Date: 6/3/2017 6:49:00 AM
Nice one, Probir, great picture painted by your words:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/3/2017 11:33:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 5/29/2017 8:05:00 PM
Creative and wonderful meaning, Probir ~*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/31/2017 5:18:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit and comments, Eve ...
Date: 5/28/2017 3:51:00 PM
love how you ended this marvelous work, probir... lovely read..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/28/2017 11:19:00 PM
Thank you, nette ...
Date: 5/28/2017 2:07:00 PM
- A beautiful picture from nature, Probir - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/28/2017 11:20:00 PM
Thank you, Anne ...
Date: 5/28/2017 10:52:00 AM
So lovely, Probir!
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Date: 5/28/2017 11:24:00 PM
Glad you like ... Thanks ...