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Peace

Like sounds

Of dew on grass

Descended the dense dusk

The flock of black geese returned home

White peace
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28 May 2017 for John Anderson's
Cinquain Express Train Contest

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/9/2017 9:40:00 PM

Such a vivid cinquain Probir. Your poem is alive with delicate and splendid imagery. 'Like sounds of dew on grass' - pure poetic bliss for my senses... I completely enjoyed your poem this evening!

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/10/2017 8:28:00 AM

Thank you, Susan ... I am honoured ...

Bawa Talwar

Date: 6/6/2017 8:31:00 PM

Its beautifully serene.In nature rests peace. Its rendering is flawless. Kindly tell me what qualities are required for apoem to be POTD .my e-mail id is talwar_amber@yahoo.in Thank u!

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/8/2017 12:53:00 AM

Thank you, Bawa ... Easier to write a poem than to say how to write ... Can't you talk to me over WhatsApp ... My no +91 9836697224