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Peace

Your hand is lying over the table.
An aura of innocence over your head
sparkling like a blooming sunflower.
You haven’t slept for million years.
All the hot blooded complainers and
Cruel smiles are hovering in the air. 
Calm like a tomb you are smiling and
dreaming about an unreal dream of love.
Don’t open your eyes before you travel
back and discover the weeping meadow.

Copyright © Sudipto Nag | Year Posted 2016

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Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/14/2016 1:30:00 PM - Thank you for your first poem, Sudipto :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sudipto Nag Date: 3/14/2016 11:26:00 PM Thanks Anne. hugs. :)

Skat A Date: 3/12/2016 10:11:00 PM Sudipto, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply Sudipto Nag Date: 3/13/2016 1:04:00 PM Nice to meet you SKAT. I make short films and beside that I love to write short stories and poems. Poetry gives peace to my soul.:D It is a very personal thing for me.

Ggg Bbb Date: 3/9/2016 4:46:00 PM welcome to soup) liked this poem so good. kamaal kar diya)) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/8/2016 11:58:00 AM Thank you for the wonderful reply...now, I will check to see if you have a new poem...Linda Login to Reply Sudipto Nag Date: 3/8/2016 12:18:00 PM Just posted a few. Check it. :D Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/8/2016 12:00:00 PM I just checked your poem list... :( hope to see a new one soon...

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/7/2016 11:15:00 PM Deep write, Sudipto, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Sudipto Nag Date: 3/8/2016 11:53:00 AM Hii Linda. Well basically I love to write. You are welcome to criticise my poetry. The more we share and discuss, we learn new things. I guess I'm not a skilled writer and I don't follow a particular style....we will know about it the more you will follow my writings. I used to write stories and I was not at all good in writing poetry but my best friend's death changed my life.....and that's when poetry arrived out of nowhere. Basically I'm a film maker and that's my passion but poetry is a very personal thing for me. It gives peace to my soul.