Paying Off In Magnolia Fragrance

Listening to your breathing, longing for your touch

Paying off in magnolia fragrant blooms
Large white puffy clouds, clear blue floating alive in the sea of sky
Forever is visible here, forever is believable

The breath of God, and flutter of his angel's wings
Reach up to heaven, touch the moon and lasso the vastness
Wooded cover visible in your mahogany eyes, sparkle like stars

Ripples of toned muscles, greet my stolen touch
Steal a look, hold a hand every chance, to love and be loved
You are my love, my life, my expectation of tomorrow
You are my only husband



God bless you Love in 2010 and forward!
Tracy your Christmas gift inspired this poem idea.
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Strand Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 7:32 AM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Doris.Rgds brian
Fisher Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 6:29 AM
Doris - many congrats on your winning poem. Rgds Janette
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January 12, 2010 at 7:41 PM
Great write! Doris! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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January 12, 2010 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations on your win with this obviously heart felt poem. Love, Joyce
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January 12, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Beautiful spiritual love. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest, Doris. Love, Lainie
Freeman Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 3:50 PM
Great tribute from a loving wife to her husband Doris. Awesome sentiments. Sincerely, Love, Moses Thank you for supporting my contest. Check your mail
Graham Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 2:01 PM
"Forever is visible here, forever is believable" Love that line. Awesome work!
Strand Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 12:52 AM
Lovely poetic Tribute Doris.Thank you for your kind words and welcome commnts.rgds Brian
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December 28, 2009 at 7:33 PM
Beautiful tribute to your beloved husband! I am sure he truly appreciates these wonderful thoughts! God bless! Peace and love, Audrey Happy New Year with all the good things you wish for yourselves!
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