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Paying Off In Magnolia Fragrance

Listening to your breathing, longing for your touch Paying off in magnolia fragrant blooms Large white puffy clouds, clear blue floating alive in the sea of sky Forever is visible here, forever is believable The breath of God, and flutter of his angel's wings Reach up to heaven, touch the moon and lasso the vastness Wooded cover visible in your mahogany eyes, sparkle like stars Ripples of toned muscles, greet my stolen touch Steal a look, hold a hand every chance, to love and be loved You are my love, my life, my expectation of tomorrow You are my only husband God bless you Love in 2010 and forward! Tracy your Christmas gift inspired this poem idea.

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Date: 1/13/2010 7:32:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Doris.Rgds brian
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Date: 1/13/2010 6:29:00 AM
Doris - many congrats on your winning poem. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:41:00 PM
Great write! Doris! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/12/2010 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this obviously heart felt poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/12/2010 8:47:00 AM
Beautiful spiritual love. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest, Doris. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/29/2009 3:50:00 PM
Great tribute from a loving wife to her husband Doris. Awesome sentiments. Sincerely, Love, Moses Thank you for supporting my contest. Check your mail
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Date: 12/29/2009 2:01:00 PM
"Forever is visible here, forever is believable" Love that line. Awesome work!
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Date: 12/29/2009 12:52:00 AM
Lovely poetic Tribute Doris.Thank you for your kind words and welcome commnts.rgds Brian
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Date: 12/28/2009 7:33:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to your beloved husband! I am sure he truly appreciates these wonderful thoughts! God bless! Peace and love, Audrey Happy New Year with all the good things you wish for yourselves!
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Date: 12/28/2009 6:20:00 PM
Nothing thrills a heart more than those three words. Say them often...I love this write, it is straight from your heart......I am sure your husband loved this write that was dedicated to him......always, Christy
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