Pay Attention While Driving

Here lies Harry Allen McGruder He passed when he wrecked his scooter He waved his goodbye, While fixing his tie They buried him in satin and pewter.
Written March 19, 2022

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Date: 3/21/2022 4:25:00 PM
I enjoyed these end rhymes very much!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/21/2022 5:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Caren.
Date: 3/20/2022 11:38:00 AM
nice one, milton! i enjoyed...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/20/2022 4:22:00 PM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Ilene. I enjoyed writing it, too.
Date: 3/20/2022 5:16:00 AM
Better to arrive a little late, than unfortunately be announced during a moments silence, that the late Mr/Mrs has unfortunately passed in an accident on his/her way here. True, poignant words. Hugs, blessings. Jennifer.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/20/2022 8:44:00 AM
True. True, Jennifer. When driving a scooter (or car) don't try to do other tasks at the same time. Concentrate on driving!
Date: 3/20/2022 3:27:00 AM
Lol, the moral of the story, always use both hands. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/20/2022 8:45:00 AM
You got that right, Tom. This guy was breaking the golden rule of driving! Always keep both hands on the steering wheel at a 10 and 2 position. No time to fiddle with a tie or even wave goodbye. Do all of that beforehand.
Date: 3/20/2022 1:55:00 AM
So funny, so clever...a real winner Milt!! Oh yeah...ab
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/20/2022 8:45:00 AM
Thanks, Anselmo. Caution to all scooter drivers!
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