Paws N Wings: Kitten N Butterflies

I closed my eyes for just a few moments to take a nap.
I was dreaming about my purrty lil' feline friend, Rose.   
My sleep was disturbed by a gentle tap tap tap tap tap.    
What are these flighty little things landing on my nose?     

I was dreaming about my purrty lil' feline friend, Rose.   
She's beautiful when she flutters her flirty green eyes.  
What are these flighty little things landing on my nose?    
I wish Rose was here with me to see the blue butterflies.   

She's beautiful when she flutters her flirty green eyes.     
Playful are these creatures I am teasing with my paws.   
I wish Rose was here with me to see the blue butterflies.     
We'd be very careful with them by sheathing our claws.   

Playful are these creatures I am teasing with my paws.  
I wish Rose and I could fly around in circles like they do.        
We'd be very careful with them by sheathing our claws.    
If I dream I have blue wings, my dream might come true.  

I wish Rose and I could fly around in circles like they do.   
My sleep was disturbed by a gentle tap tap tap tap tap.    
If I dream I have blue wings, my dream might come true.    
I closed my eyes for just a few moments to take a nap. 



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2.18.16    Kitten and Butterflies Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 3/20/2016 10:15:00 PM
The tap tap tap tap tap was so cute, Lin. I'm curious about this Rose Mr. Sleepy Head is dreaming about. The kittens and butterflies were adorable enough ... now there's a combo of the two! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/20/2016 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful! ... Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/20/2016 12:33:00 AM
Congrats Lin to win on a beautiful dream. Anisha D
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:54:00 PM
A beautiful dream, flying like the butterflies. I like your kitties.
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Date: 3/19/2016 8:10:00 PM
Hi Lin, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. I so enjoyed this dream of a write. Well crafted Lin. This is most definitely a seven. A delight to the senses....Vlad.
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Date: 3/19/2016 5:58:00 PM
Congrats!!!! ( ( ( ) ) ) Sara
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Date: 3/19/2016 4:16:00 PM
a delightful poem Lin many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/19/2016 4:02:00 PM
Lin, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 3/19/2016 3:51:00 PM
Lin ,thank you all for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT : ) Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/26/2016 8:08:00 AM
then you need to lose some weight or the wings will be just for decorations only lol, that's one awesome imagination there Lin, you're always with that great thoughts, best of luck in the contest
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/26/2016 8:11:00 AM
Those wings are stronger then they look, but I'll ease up on the cat treats ~lol Thanks for your well wishes, Sage.
Date: 2/18/2016 12:36:00 PM
You better check your tea or whatever your beverage is. LOL A nap like that for me and I'd have to go to the doctor. Very feminine and purrrty(as you say) write. Good luck in contest.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/18/2016 12:39:00 PM
I think perhaps purrty Rose slipped some catnip in my tea. Thanks, Danny.
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