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Paws N Wings: Kitten N Butterflies

I closed my eyes for just a few moments to take a nap.
I was dreaming about my purrty lil' feline friend, Rose.   
My sleep was disturbed by a gentle tap tap tap tap tap.    
What are these flighty little things landing on my nose?     

I was dreaming about my purrty lil' feline friend, Rose.   
She's beautiful when she flutters her flirty green eyes.  
What are these flighty little things landing on my nose?    
I wish Rose was here with me to see the blue butterflies.   

She's beautiful when she flutters her flirty green eyes.     
Playful are these creatures I am teasing with my paws.   
I wish Rose was here with me to see the blue butterflies.     
We'd be very careful with them by sheathing our claws.   

Playful are these creatures I am teasing with my paws.  
I wish Rose and I could fly around in circles like they do.        
We'd be very careful with them by sheathing our claws.    
If I dream I have blue wings, my dream might come true.  

I wish Rose and I could fly around in circles like they do.   
My sleep was disturbed by a gentle tap tap tap tap tap.    
If I dream I have blue wings, my dream might come true.    
I closed my eyes for just a few moments to take a nap. 



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2.18.16    Kitten and Butterflies Contest

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Timothy Hicks March 20, 2016 at 10:15 PM The tap tap tap tap tap was so cute, Lin. I'm curious about this Rose Mr. Sleepy Head is dreaming about. The kittens and butterflies were adorable enough ... now there's a combo of the two! Congrats on your win.

Anindya Mohan Tagore March 20, 2016 at 9:22 AM Beautiful! ... Hugs, Bobby

Anisha Dutta March 20, 2016 at 12:33 AM Congrats Lin to win on a beautiful dream. Anisha D

James Inman March 19, 2016 at 9:54 PM A beautiful dream, flying like the butterflies. I like your kitties.

Vladislav Raven March 19, 2016 at 8:10 PM Hi Lin, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. I so enjoyed this dream of a write. Well crafted Lin. This is most definitely a seven. A delight to the senses....Vlad.

Sara Kendrick March 19, 2016 at 5:58 PM Congrats!!!! ( ( ( ) ) ) Sara

Jan Allison March 19, 2016 at 4:16 PM a delightful poem Lin many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars March 19, 2016 at 4:02 PM Lin, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo

Eve Roper March 19, 2016 at 3:51 PM Lin ,thank you all for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT : ) Hugs Eve

White Sage February 26, 2016 at 8:08 AM then you need to lose some weight or the wings will be just for decorations only lol, that's one awesome imagination there Lin, you're always with that great thoughts, best of luck in the contest Lin Lane February 26, 2016 at 8:11 AM Those wings are stronger then they look, but I'll ease up on the cat treats ~lol Thanks for your well wishes, Sage.

Daniel Turner February 18, 2016 at 12:36 PM You better check your tea or whatever your beverage is. LOL A nap like that for me and I'd have to go to the doctor. Very feminine and purrrty(as you say) write. Good luck in contest. Lin Lane February 18, 2016 at 12:39 PM I think perhaps purrty Rose slipped some catnip in my tea. Thanks, Danny.