Paw Prints

Paw prints in the snow
Easy for the cat to trace
Squirrel must…beware!

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/16/2017 4:17:00 PM

I like the image you present, ML. Hope that squirrel is a good athlete! Regards // paul

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/17/2017 12:37:00 PM

Thanks, apparently it is a great athlete; he and his pals manage to chew up our phone line and take out my broadband at least once a year...and still, I luv'em...

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2017 6:54:00 PM

what a fascinating picture you conjure up M L - we have no squirrels here on our little island, they are considered to be vermin. I'm not sure which one would win if they were to meet:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/17/2017 12:39:00 PM

I believe they are classed as vermin everywhere. They managed to move into my pear trees a few years back and so, I have to get up early to beat them to my delicious sugar pears. Still, they get most of them because they can eat them before they're ripe and I can't...way too hard. Glad you stopped by.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 7/15/2017 6:29:00 PM

Squirrels are fast, is a cat faster. I don't know.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/17/2017 12:40:00 PM

Not my cat; she's 13 years old and although she's spry; I don't want her tangling with them...and she'll try her best to get'em if she get's out there. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/15/2017 2:51:00 PM

- I hope the squirrel is faster than the cat - Lovely haiku, M.L. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/17/2017 12:41:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/14/2017 3:28:00 PM

My sister'c cat was so proud of the bloody chipmunks he brought in. Do you know the poem by J.R.R. Tolkien about cats? In it the house cat remembers his days as a lion!! Yours Matthew Anish

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/15/2017 12:38:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by; yes I love Tolkein.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/13/2017 10:40:00 AM

I love the images this evokes. My money is on the squirrel! Thanks for your visit.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/17/2017 12:42:00 PM

Your money would be doubled...thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/13/2017 7:24:00 AM

We must alarm the Squirrels dear friend! Beautifully done dear, MLK!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/17/2017 12:46:00 PM

Hee, it's more like I need the alarm; have had the squirrels tossing pears at my head when I get near my own trees. Still, those sugar-pears are really worth the fight. Thanks.

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