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Pausing To Pray

coral snakes come up to the surface to breathe the sweet air weaving their basket what bundle of love extraordinaire only one change to pair then mate while pausing to pray

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Date: 9/18/2009 9:38:00 PM
Vivid and interesting write, nicely penned...Raul
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Date: 9/10/2009 3:08:00 PM
interesting imagery - still trying to weave snakes and prayer together in my mind. Krista
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Date: 9/10/2009 1:52:00 PM
Very interesting haiku Gregory, God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/10/2009 1:51:00 PM
This is a very interesting Haiku. I can see some coral snakes in a mating dance. Don't know if that is what you mean. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/10/2009 1:43:00 PM
Interesting view. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
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