pause POTD


beneath stars
city noise pauses, 
essence floats
soothing breaths
night    enshrined...
cuddling quietude

peaceselfother

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Lyric Man

October 4, 2025 at 10:53 AM

Sounds like a sweet escape in a loving embrace.. left me longing!

Deb M

October 2, 2025 at 5:11 AM

Cuddling quietude…l just love that line especially Nette….it appeals to me as l’m a big cuddler! Gorgeous Poem!! Belated Congratulations on POTD! Debx

Len Gasun

September 30, 2025 at 7:12 PM

So serene dearest poet friend and sis! Congrats on your POTD! Hugs and cheers! Thanks a lot for sharing with us this precious gem and your superb poetic talent. God bless you always and your poetry.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

September 30, 2025 at 9:54 AM

Dear Nette, Congrats on POTD. Such a soft exhale at the end of a long day. You managed to tuck so much peace into such a small space almost like a gentle pocket of stillness we can carry around. Beautifully done. Autumn Blessings, Nette, Daniel

Marugu Mo

September 30, 2025 at 5:41 AM

Congrats on your POTD honor. City life can indeed be overwhelming until we break from it

Mickey Grubb

September 30, 2025 at 5:16 AM

So peaceful, Nette. Enjoy your special time!

Valsa George

September 30, 2025 at 5:16 AM

Night is enshrined in cuddling quietude! Beautiful little poem dear Nette. Congratulations on your POTD honor.

Gershon Wolf

September 29, 2025 at 6:49 PM

Was this also for one of Line's contests? If so, I imagine that's two winners 'for the price of one.' Congrats, Nette. ~ Gershon

Brandy Nicole

September 29, 2025 at 6:09 PM

Great advice ! Every now and then, we need to push the pause button. Enjoy the beauty of nature and tender moments. Congratulations Nette, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy