Unseeking Seeker Poet Pleiades

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Pause - Pleiades

Peace blissful and tranquil
Pervading our being
Pulsating bliss rapture
Piercing each pore of form
Prolonging ecstasy
Play of divine silence
Pouring love ceaselessly

08-April-2021

Pleiades P Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman

7-lines @ 6 syllables per line

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Sara Kendrick April 16, 2021 at 3:36 AM Purposely pause and force oneself to leave. I think the snapshot is awesome. Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara Unseeking Seeker April 16, 2021 at 4:25 AM :)

Paula Goldsmith April 13, 2021 at 8:35 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. We do need to pause to find peace from time to time. Have a blessed day......... Unseeking Seeker April 13, 2021 at 8:37 AM Thank you so much, dear Paula!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2021 at 7:08 AM - Congratulations on your win ... well deserved, U.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Unseeking Seeker April 13, 2021 at 8:20 AM Thank you, Sunshine!

Andrea Dietrich April 12, 2021 at 1:45 PM Very nicely described for that special pause of meditation!! Unseeking Seeker April 12, 2021 at 6:19 PM Thanks Andrea! :)

Kim Merryman April 12, 2021 at 1:05 PM Thank you for participating in my contest and congrats on your win! Taking time to pause in the middle of busyness is always a good thing. Blessings, Kim M Unseeking Seeker April 12, 2021 at 6:19 PM Thank you, Kim! Happy you enjoyed! Thanks for hosting the contest

Michelle Faulkner April 8, 2021 at 2:25 PM So lovely, especially 'play of divine silence' - meditation can be so healing - should do well in the contest~ Unseeking Seeker April 8, 2021 at 6:37 PM Thanks Michelle! :)

Alexis Y. April 8, 2021 at 10:19 AM WoW! Seeker Your poem describes your title very well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Unseeking Seeker April 8, 2021 at 6:37 PM Thank you, Alexis!