Pause

Stop and feel the wind taste the Jasmine in the air Pause, feel life, it grows shorter Take in all you can see the beauty of the world love friends, take chances, don't pause! AgMoore©

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2011 2:44:00 PM

Expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon.Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2011 7:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being once again featured before the final round of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Amanda. The best to you in the contest.

James Fraser

Date: 7/20/2011 3:32:00 PM

Always look forward and never look back. Another wisdom etched write and a joy to read Amanda. It was a pleasure to read you :)

Amanda Moore
Date: 7/20/2011 5:41:00 PM

Thanks so much James I try not to look back but sometimes I take a peek = )

Johnny Sumler

Date: 7/16/2011 5:43:00 PM

Wow! This is really good Amanda...I don't think I've ever read this form so beautifuly expressed!

Amanda Moore
Date: 7/20/2011 5:43:00 PM

Johnny there are many structured poetry forms that are so easy to do this is one of them.... I appreciate the kindness in your comments very much!