Amanda Moore Poet Sedoka

Pause

 Stop and feel the wind
taste the Jasmine in the air
Pause, feel life, it grows shorter
 
Take in all you can
see the beauty of the world
love friends, take chances, don't pause! 

 AgMoore© 

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Sara Kendrick November 10, 2011 at 2:44 PM Expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon.Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 9, 2011 at 7:40 AM Congratulations on your poetry being once again featured before the final round of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Amanda. The best to you in the contest.

James Fraser July 20, 2011 at 3:32 PM Always look forward and never look back. Another wisdom etched write and a joy to read Amanda. It was a pleasure to read you :) Amanda Moore July 20, 2011 at 5:41 PM Thanks so much James I try not to look back but sometimes I take a peek = )

Johnny Sumler July 16, 2011 at 5:43 PM Wow! This is really good Amanda...I don't think I've ever read this form so beautifuly expressed! Amanda Moore July 20, 2011 at 5:43 PM Johnny there are many structured poetry forms that are so easy to do this is one of them.... I appreciate the kindness in your comments very much!