Andrea Dietrich Poet Triolet

Paulette - 2

The cute coquette that I’ve just met -
a sweet petite brunette is she.
I sing her name: Paulette; Paulette -
the cute coquette that I’ve just met!
A date with her I aim to get
so one day on one knee I’ll be!
The cute coquette that I’ve just met -
a sweet petite brunette is she.

Jan. 10, 2022

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Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2022 at 7:16 PM Congratulations! Love it!

Paulette Calasibetta January 16, 2022 at 9:34 AM Love this! Your sweet imagery, very catchy! Congratulations on your win! :)Paulette

Christuraj Alex January 15, 2022 at 5:29 AM A great teriolet with "cute coquette" - Beautiful! Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker January 13, 2022 at 9:11 PM Oozing vibrant charm of innocence!

Valsa George January 13, 2022 at 5:37 PM Beautifully done ! Love the line- "A sweet petite brunette is she". Definitely she will yield .... :)

Regina Mcintosh January 12, 2022 at 5:21 AM Oh, amazing writing... love it. A really great entry. God bless you, Love, Gina

John Lawless January 11, 2022 at 5:10 PM You always make this troublesome Triolet form look so easy.....smooth, rhythmical, and enticing....great job

M. L. Kiser January 11, 2022 at 2:40 PM Nicely done to the form.

Victor Buhagiar January 11, 2022 at 3:07 AM Love is blind. Loved the repetitions. Hugs.

Eve Roper January 10, 2022 at 7:21 PM This is beautiful and very rhythmic verse. Good luck in the contest... Blessings to a new year

Connie Marcum Wong January 10, 2022 at 4:29 PM This is so sweet Andrea. I could exchange Paulette to my granddaughters name, Cosette. Best wishes in the contest. I wish I had more time to write, but we are working to finish my husbands room. Blessings xxoo Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2022 at 11:08 PM yes, you should do that, and read it to her!!

Bill Baker January 10, 2022 at 4:27 PM And a sweet triolet in poetry. Fun read, well written in form, Andrea. Hugs, Bill