Paulette - 1

I've a childhood friend I cannot forget.
Since first grade, I've known Paulette.
I haven't heard from her in some time,
and both of us are well past our prime.
I called to see how she was doing,
and right off she started boo-hooing.
I was sorry to learn her health is bad.
Poor Paulette, sounded terribly sad.


November 11, 2021
Paulette - 1 Contest
Sponsor: Julia Ward
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La France Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Jenna, congratulations on your Third place win in Julia's contest, wonderful writing ~ love and serenity _Constance
Logan Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 10:21 AM
Thank you, Constance. I entered this one so long ago that I'd forgotten it.
Agustin Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 1:20 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Logan Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 6:16 AM
Thank you, Beata.
Alex Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 10:46 PM
Beautiful verses with a very involving touch. Great writing! Congratulations!
Logan Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 6:16 AM
Thanks, Chris.
Mcintosh Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 2:27 PM
Love it! Congrats on your wonderful win! God bless you always. Love, Gina
Logan Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 6:15 AM
Thanks a lot, Gina.
Kalita Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:08 PM
Hey dear Jeena, this is Silpika here, I just loved it, how beautifully, painfully written, it's feast to the soul! Love to say thanks for this more than in depth reflective share!
Logan Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Thank you for such kind thoughts for this poem, Silpika
Baker Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 9:29 AM
I have a like relationship with many of the ex students and runners I taught and coached that still stay in touch through facebook and email. Thankyou for sharing your relationship with Paulette, Jenna Bill
Logan Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, Bill. It’s a fiction piece for one of the last contests I’ll be entering.
Koplin Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 5:49 AM
Our bodies might be in their prime when we are young, but our minds are in their prime with age. Love it!
Logan Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 6:03 AM
Somethings DO get better with age. Thank you, Mark.
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November 12, 2021 at 9:07 PM
Poor Paulette, it’s sad when age does things such as that. Good write for the contest Jenna… Belle
Logan Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 6:03 AM
We'll see about the contest. Never sure how they'll go. Thanks, Belle.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 1:19 AM
We all get old an sick.
Logan Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Sad but true, Victor.
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