Paul Revere's Dog Walk

When Paul Revere walks his dog Nettie
He looks for a spot for her to pee
As they stroll to the bay
With her leading the way
She will go ‘one’ by land and ‘two’ by sea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Romios Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Very clever David, i always enhoy your Avikty oo thik outside the box!. Pangie xx
Beaufort Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 6:19 PM
David, you have such a great sense of humor. It's totally appropriate and ironic for the current state of affairs. Really cute as well even with no other implications. I'd be surprised if many people even know what you are referring to these days.
Greenhough Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:15 PM
A great read. It is cute and funny.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 11:04 AM
A cute one. Thanks for the levity.
Jones Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 12:30 AM
Witty clever cute lol
Rodgers Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 6:01 PM
Hello David, your poem is delightful! The playful twist on history with Nettie leading the way 'one' by land and 'two' by sea is ingenious. It's a charming blend of humor and historical imagery that brought a smile to my face. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel
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