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Paul Revere's Dog Walk

When Paul Revere walks his dog Nettie He looks for a spot for her to pee As they stroll to the bay With her leading the way She will go ‘one’ by land and ‘two’ by sea

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/5/2024 10:31:00 AM

Very clever David, i always enhoy your Avikty oo thik outside the box!. Pangie xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/31/2024 6:19:00 PM

David, you have such a great sense of humor. It's totally appropriate and ironic for the current state of affairs. Really cute as well even with no other implications. I'd be surprised if many people even know what you are referring to these days.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/26/2024 9:15:00 PM

A great read. It is cute and funny.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/26/2024 11:04:00 AM

A cute one. Thanks for the levity.

Karen Jones

Date: 3/26/2024 12:30:00 AM

Witty clever cute lol

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/25/2024 6:01:00 PM

Hello David, your poem is delightful! The playful twist on history with Nettie leading the way 'one' by land and 'two' by sea is ingenious. It's a charming blend of humor and historical imagery that brought a smile to my face. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel