Patty's Proclamation

Partly patient possibly passionate pretty Patty played prissy.
Rarely romantic rugged rakish Randy reacted with rejection.
Quickly quashing questions quixotic quietly quitting this quandary
she sashayed skirts and simply said sayonara sucker!


* note *  my sissy made me giggle out loud when she tried.
               A couple friends too ,sounded like they were pie-eyed!!

for contest"Big Kid Tongue Twister Challenge"
sponsored by ~Gwendolen~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Neels Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 2:13 PM
A fun twister to try out loud Deb, wishing you all the best for the contest :) Wilma
Smith Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 1:05 PM
hahahah I read it out loud and did a lot better than I thought I would because I usually suck at these things... really enjoyed it this was fun. Good luck in the contest!
Falotico Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 6:46 AM
This is a twister!!! Wishing you all the best in the contest,,,,,Michael
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