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Patterns In the Dark

Smoking chimneys show
Autumn nights are almost here
Spitting logs on fire
Sending patterns in the dark
As I sit relaxed with you.


Penned 30 August 2014

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2014

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Olusegun Arowolo

September 7, 2014 at 1:10 PM

Lovely piece,Seren...Congrats on your win..

September 15, 2014 at 2:50 PM

Thank you for your congrats....Seren

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

September 5, 2014 at 11:42 AM

And back again wid huge congrats Seren on ur awesome win!

September 15, 2014 at 2:51 PM

Thanks Dr Upma .....Seren

September 5, 2014 at 9:07 AM

Yes what Andrea said. Congratulations.

September 15, 2014 at 2:51 PM

Hi Maurice many thx....Seren

September 5, 2014 at 8:23 AM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..This one is so soothing..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

September 4, 2014 at 9:57 PM

glad to see this on the list. Congrats, dear!

September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM

Thx Andrea ....Seren

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 4, 2014 at 6:53 PM

Congratulations Serena. I love fires.

September 4, 2014 at 8:04 PM

Thank you Brenda .....Seren

September 4, 2014 at 4:33 PM

beautifully painted picture many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

September 4, 2014 at 8:06 PM

Thx Jan,

Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2014 at 4:43 PM

this is a very lovely tanka from you, Seren. It really is.

August 30, 2014 at 12:25 PM

You set a lovely scene Seren ;) Thanks so much for reading and commenting on my verse. Light & Love

September 4, 2014 at 9:47 PM

Thank u Debbie,,,,,,Seren

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 29, 2014 at 11:39 PM

Wow lovely tanka Seren! good luck my friend!

September 4, 2014 at 9:49 PM

Thank u Dr Upma

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