Patterns In the Dark

Smoking chimneys show
Autumn nights are almost here
Spitting logs on fire
Sending patterns in the dark
As I sit relaxed with you.


Penned 30 August 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 9/7/2014 1:10:00 PM
Lovely piece,Seren...Congrats on your win..
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2014 2:50:00 PM
Thank you for your congrats....Seren
Date: 9/5/2014 11:42:00 AM
And back again wid huge congrats Seren on ur awesome win!
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Date: 9/15/2014 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Dr Upma .....Seren
Date: 9/5/2014 9:07:00 AM
Yes what Andrea said. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/15/2014 2:51:00 PM
Hi Maurice many thx....Seren
Date: 9/5/2014 8:23:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..This one is so soothing..Sara
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Date: 9/4/2014 9:57:00 PM
glad to see this on the list. Congrats, dear!
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Date: 9/5/2014 12:00:00 AM
Thx Andrea ....Seren
Date: 9/4/2014 6:53:00 PM
Congratulations Serena. I love fires.
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Date: 9/4/2014 8:04:00 PM
Thank you Brenda .....Seren
Date: 9/4/2014 4:33:00 PM
beautifully painted picture many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/4/2014 8:06:00 PM
Thx Jan,
Date: 8/30/2014 4:43:00 PM
this is a very lovely tanka from you, Seren. It really is.
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:25:00 PM
You set a lovely scene Seren ;) Thanks so much for reading and commenting on my verse. Light & Love
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Date: 9/4/2014 9:47:00 PM
Thank u Debbie,,,,,,Seren
Date: 8/29/2014 11:39:00 PM
Wow lovely tanka Seren! good luck my friend!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/4/2014 9:49:00 PM
Thank u Dr Upma
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