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Patterns In the Dark

Smoking chimneys show Autumn nights are almost here Spitting logs on fire Sending patterns in the dark As I sit relaxed with you. Penned 30 August 2014

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Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/7/2014 1:10:00 PM

Lovely piece,Seren...Congrats on your win..

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2014 2:50:00 PM

Thank you for your congrats....Seren

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/5/2014 11:42:00 AM

And back again wid huge congrats Seren on ur awesome win!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2014 2:51:00 PM

Thanks Dr Upma .....Seren

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/5/2014 9:07:00 AM

Yes what Andrea said. Congratulations.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2014 2:51:00 PM

Hi Maurice many thx....Seren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2014 8:23:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..This one is so soothing..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2014 9:57:00 PM

glad to see this on the list. Congrats, dear!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/5/2014 12:00:00 AM

Thx Andrea ....Seren

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/4/2014 6:53:00 PM

Congratulations Serena. I love fires.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/4/2014 8:04:00 PM

Thank you Brenda .....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 9/4/2014 4:33:00 PM

beautifully painted picture many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/4/2014 8:06:00 PM

Thx Jan,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2014 4:43:00 PM

this is a very lovely tanka from you, Seren. It really is.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/30/2014 12:25:00 PM

You set a lovely scene Seren ;) Thanks so much for reading and commenting on my verse. Light & Love

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/4/2014 9:47:00 PM

Thank u Debbie,,,,,,Seren

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/29/2014 11:39:00 PM

Wow lovely tanka Seren! good luck my friend!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/4/2014 9:49:00 PM

Thank u Dr Upma