Carrie Richards Poet Kimo

Patterns

Nothing is here I have not learned by heart,

yet, still my conscience startles

at the rise of the sun




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For Chris Aechtner's Contest: "Kooky and Krazily Kimotastic Kimotherapy "

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Kim Merryman December 26, 2011 at 1:21 PM Nice Kimo, Carrie. Congrats on your win! Kim

Robert Pettit December 24, 2011 at 11:08 PM Great kimo Carrie. Congratulations on your win.

Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2011 at 9:30 PM Carrie... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

Audrey Haick December 23, 2011 at 9:17 PM : ) I can relate, Carrie...Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest! Merry Christmas to you and yours! Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich December 22, 2011 at 7:02 PM wow, this is just breathtaking! Congrats on your win.

The Situation December 22, 2011 at 6:25 PM guilty concious.

Sara Kendrick December 22, 2011 at 5:40 PM Great work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Glad to hear that you got your prize..Sara

Greg Stanley December 22, 2011 at 3:49 PM Carrie, very nicely done, congratulations on you win, Season’s Greetings and Merry Christmas.

Bob Quigley December 22, 2011 at 2:34 PM Nicely said Carrie. Congratulations on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown December 22, 2011 at 11:08 AM Congratulations on your win in the Chris D. Aechtner "Kimo" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Iolanda Scripca December 18, 2011 at 5:00 PM Kreat Kimo, Karrie!!! Kappy Kolidays ko kuo!!! Kove, Kolanda :0)

Russell Sivey December 18, 2011 at 4:26 PM What a wonderful Kimo you have written here Carrie!! I just love the Kimo form, it's so much fun! If you really think of it, it is amazing that the sun still rises! I enjoyed how you put the poem together, outstanding form!! Awesome Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2011 at 12:22 PM Good Carrie. OXOX Love Anne-Lise

Kabuteng P.Ink K. December 18, 2011 at 9:57 AM You are so right, Carrie-- sometimes it can just be alarming on what this world is coming to?-- I wish you the best in this thought-provoking kimo, Carrie! hugs to you!!