Patriotism

The coral crumbles, and paradise is overthrown in sand
And they pour the children into it like water upon tongues
What the breeze blows in my eyes cannot blind my tears

Your captains do not know the shoals like me, I dreamed awake
Among the reefs, before the breakers plundered everything
I long now to hold your rudder, but time has rot the ropey ladder

Night and day, high tides and low, I sob to mount the slippery deck
Where the tropic spray may slap may face and brace me to the plank
Until I dock the fairest ship in history's fairest weather

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/9/2010 6:56:00 AM
patriot of the sea? jhl
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Date: 11/28/2010 3:56:00 AM
Holy crap this was fantastic, David!!
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Date: 11/26/2010 8:19:00 PM
Always filled with insight and wisdom David. We are in one boat, tis true. And I don't see how this can be overlooked?! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/24/2010 5:26:00 PM
Happy thanksgiving day, David
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Date: 11/23/2010 9:37:00 AM
Lots is done for the sake of patriotism. I like your view on it and they way you liken it to a boat on the ocean. Excellent write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 11/22/2010 5:10:00 AM
So beautiful to read ......and thanks for your kind comments on my work!
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Date: 11/21/2010 11:49:00 AM
A beautiful write David.. As always much enjoyed ;) Wilma
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Date: 11/19/2010 11:56:00 PM
Strong emotions of yours felt in this poem. Beautiful as always! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/19/2010 8:43:00 PM
Lovely lines David.. very expressive .. very touching piece luv.. enjoyed reading your creativity tonight .. happy weekend luv..
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Date: 11/19/2010 7:33:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it very much!
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Date: 11/19/2010 3:56:00 PM
Interesting work in this one...Very descriptive work..Sara
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Date: 11/19/2010 1:50:00 PM
LOVE WILL ALWAYS BOUND A SACRIFICE. ALL THE WILLINGNESS YOU DO TO GET SLAP AROUND COMES BACK TO THE LOVE OF OUR HISTORIES WEATHER AND COUNTRY,,ENJOYED YOUR POEM:-) WELL TRIED TO UNDERSTAND MUCH OF IT,, HAVE A NICE ONE,..P.D.
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Date: 11/19/2010 1:17:00 PM
You have expressed nice thoughts on patriotism with good images with this multiple sijo, David
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Date: 11/19/2010 11:55:00 AM
A beautiful sigt David' (Lin~Ra)
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