Patriotism

The coral crumbles, and paradise is overthrown in sand
And they pour the children into it like water upon tongues
What the breeze blows in my eyes cannot blind my tears

Your captains do not know the shoals like me, I dreamed awake
Among the reefs, before the breakers plundered everything
I long now to hold your rudder, but time has rot the ropey ladder

Night and day, high tides and low, I sob to mount the slippery deck
Where the tropic spray may slap may face and brace me to the plank
Until I dock the fairest ship in history's fairest weather
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Loving Iii Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 6:56 AM
patriot of the sea? jhl
Tacito Avatar
November 28, 2010 at 3:56 AM
Holy crap this was fantastic, David!!
Haick Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 8:19 PM
Always filled with insight and wisdom David. We are in one boat, tis true. And I don't see how this can be overlooked?! Love, Audrey
Mehta Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 5:26 PM
Happy thanksgiving day, David
Babcock Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Lots is done for the sake of patriotism. I like your view on it and they way you liken it to a boat on the ocean. Excellent write. God Bless Phyl
Bloomsfield Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 5:10 AM
So beautiful to read ......and thanks for your kind comments on my work!
Neels Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 11:49 AM
A beautiful write David.. As always much enjoyed ;) Wilma
Dietrich Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 11:56 PM
Strong emotions of yours felt in this poem. Beautiful as always! Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 8:43 PM
Lovely lines David.. very expressive .. very touching piece luv.. enjoyed reading your creativity tonight .. happy weekend luv..
Slaughter Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 7:33 PM
This is a beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading it very much!
Kendrick Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 3:56 PM
Interesting work in this one...Very descriptive work..Sara
A   Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 1:50 PM
LOVE WILL ALWAYS BOUND A SACRIFICE. ALL THE WILLINGNESS YOU DO TO GET SLAP AROUND COMES BACK TO THE LOVE OF OUR HISTORIES WEATHER AND COUNTRY,,ENJOYED YOUR POEM:-) WELL TRIED TO UNDERSTAND MUCH OF IT,, HAVE A NICE ONE,..P.D.
Mehta Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 1:17 PM
You have expressed nice thoughts on patriotism with good images with this multiple sijo, David
Ammutlinra Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 11:55 AM
A beautiful sigt David' (Lin~Ra)
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