Patriotic Fanaticism

Perhaps,
it is in the most
unlikely hours and places
such as the so temporary
quieting down of the guns,

the stench of blood, of death,
the agony of the wounded, the dying,
and the final silence of the slain
in this blood-soaked
battlefield

that you may see
a night rainbow descend
to pay homage to the sullied soil,
and it shall belatedly dawn on you
that, after all, so much of what

is hazy, stupid or hidden
about peace, about war,
about patriotic fanaticism
is, as you lay there dying,
just absurd !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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March 8, 2009 at 3:21 PM
I hear you. I agree. Century after century every generation manages to convince the young men & woman hat it's noble to fight in foriegn wars. Of course the educated wealthy have never been the ones on the fronts, thier fortunes are what's on the line not their lives. There was a whole generation of us boomers raised on "Hell no I won't go." I wish they'd bring back the concept. Light & Love
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August 4, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Thanks, Debbie.
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August 4, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Thanks, Debbie.
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