Patricia

Patricia dawdled through the breakfast
Mom got angry, sent her to Belfast
There she learnt how to run
And how to eat a bun
And returned with the bread crumbs amassed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 7:57 PM
I enjoyed this one~
May Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Very nice limerick Rajat....best wishes
Roper Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 11:12 AM
7, my friend, I hope those buns were a Hamburg’s, they are my favorite, my husband gets mad at me for eating them at my age he says it is ruining my cholesterol. Blessings
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January 1, 2015 at 11:30 AM
Eve you should be moderate in taking such stuff. Your husband is right. He wants your wellbeing.So indulge a craving but with a bit of caution.cholesterol gathering is not a good idea.Wish you in best of health in 2015.Love Dear -rajat
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