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Patricia - 4 Haiku

1. Silloth, thousand miles but closer considering how much we wanted. 2. even car silence was comfortable, ok never dull moments. 3. bedroom, who’d believe this tiger waiting to pounce to savage and maul. 4. goodbye, train station quick pic to prove it was real coming again, true. 14.2.2020 23:15

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Date: 1/5/2022 9:55:00 AM
Interesting lines penned in this one. I am guessing it is about a love affair. I am glad I chose it to read today. Sara
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Date: 1/5/2022 10:15:00 PM
It is Sara and thank you. Silloth’s a place by the way. Neil

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