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Patio Picnic For Top Ten Guests

They come uninvited with no gifts in hand the strangest assortment of guests in the land. First is the stray kitty, who won’t let me pet him. He pulled at my heartstring, the first time I met him. Next Mr. Raccoon, well known for his thievings. He is here to partake of the stray kitty’s leavings. Then Mrs. Possum with babes clinging to her. I know she is hungry, I just cannot shoo her. I fill her dish full and she eats it and leaves some. I am glad there's some left when I see Sir Skunk come. Here are the bunnies, I throw them some lettuce. They say, “Thank you ma’am, but please don’t try to pet us” Down comes a crow to fly off with the bread. A sparrow awaits for the crumbs that he'll shed. A humming bird hovers at sweet water feeder. A ladybug waits but the bird doesn’t heed her. A slug gets a slice of my apple with peeling. To salvage his pride, let him think he is stealing. So this is my list of assortment of beasts Who depend on my handouts and feed at my feasts. For Adeleke's "Top Ten" contest

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Date: 6/21/2011 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Adeleke's "Top Ten" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/19/2011 3:52:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of adeleke, Joyce
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Date: 6/19/2011 2:14:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on another fantastic win in the top ten contest .. this is a very interesting one and a delight to read my friend..enjoy luv..
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Date: 6/19/2011 9:52:00 AM
I'm grateful for your support, congrats on your 8th place. Luv, Ade
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Date: 6/10/2011 8:32:00 AM
I thought this was cute john
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Date: 5/31/2011 1:16:00 PM
Another wonderful write from you Joyce.Best wishes...
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Date: 5/25/2011 8:13:00 PM
A totally original way to do the contest, Joyce. You are a joy to have at Soup!!
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Date: 5/25/2011 6:18:00 PM
Creative, funny and brilliantly enjoyable, Joyce
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Date: 5/25/2011 5:28:00 PM
this one was so funny and cute, really loved this most creative piece of art, will put this poem in my favorites.
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Date: 5/25/2011 11:45:00 AM
Hi Joyce! I like your poem depicting a very unusual feast. You seem to be an animal lover with an interesting list of assorted beasts. God bless you! -Mohammad
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Date: 5/24/2011 10:51:00 AM
Ah, you had me giggling, Joyce. Love the way you bestowed knighthood on Sir Skunk. Animals make for great companions, dear, and I spend more time communing with them than I do with people. Adeleke is sure to love this! Winning wishes to you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2011 10:37:00 AM
Your poetry has a special charm Joyce and I love this one. It would be great to spend a day among the critters. Good luck in the contest, Diane
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Date: 5/23/2011 8:35:00 PM
brilliant write Joyce on the top ten for the contest.. u gave each couplet its own personality my friend.. good luck in this contest.. as always ..GREAT...
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