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Patients and Patience

They take that patient on that trolley. Echoes bounce from that corridor, from talk, from footsteps, from that wall - and from that misery. That misery is a mystery for the guy on that trolley. He hears that chat, those echoes from those walls, those footsteps. He also knows what happened back at home, with that partner, that fight, that punch, that grief. That welcome trolley carries him, so smoothly. (8 December 2023)

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Date: 12/8/2023 3:15:00 PM
loved the title and the unique flow of your poem. I also appreciate the subtlety of the abuse the man on the trolley (hospital guerney?) knows . Magnificent! have a splendid evening, Sara
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Andrew John
Date: 12/12/2023 6:33:00 AM
Yes, sometimes described as a cot or stretcher on wheels or bed on wheels. Of course, we have the word grief here. I do wonder whether my character killed. Oh, dear! Thanks for your comment, Sara, as always.

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