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they say to quiet the mind and the soul will speak. that’s what they say. i quiet my mind and i hear but silence. sensing the mere surge of longing. but the words do not come. the knot inside still tight. resisting and yet… and yet they say to quiet the mind and the soul will speak. so I do but to no avail. i get silence. silence. i get more silence. and silence is not always golden. AP: 2nd place 2022 Posted on September 18, 2022

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Date: 9/18/2022 11:04:00 PM
I could feel the pain in your words. Silence is not always a good thing. I enjoyed reading this poem.
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Date: 9/19/2022 8:44:00 AM
Thanks, Julie. Much appreciated ~

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