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Patient Love

Time was when love was very near, lying there in waiting. In dawdling youth I looked away, with heart and head debating. The mind grew weary after while, conceding heart had won. The heart extended welcome, but ‘twas found that love had gone. A love that is not nourished will simply fade away. Its steadfastness must be cared for and tended every day. Improvident the lass or lad who holds love carelessly. It’s rare the love that can endure rejection endlessly. Won a 3rd

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Date: 12/29/2011 4:13:00 PM
A wise message, Joyce. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/29/2011 10:59:00 AM
sweet congrats on this fine win, joyce and special greetings for hitting the TPS poetry contest.. love and lots of huggs!
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Date: 12/28/2011 11:08:00 PM
Joyce, Very nicely done. Congratulations on you win, Greg
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Date: 12/28/2011 10:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest. Given a hidden message in your write. Thanks, bl
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Date: 12/28/2011 4:58:00 PM
GREAT message in this cute little poem, Joyce. A message I like to explore from time to time. Congrats on your well-deserved win.
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Date: 12/28/2011 10:59:00 AM
Very true words you have penned here Joyce.Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/28/2011 7:47:00 AM
Really nice Joyce. Congratulations
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Date: 12/28/2011 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2011 1:46:00 AM
Congratulations x
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Date: 12/23/2011 12:23:00 PM
Thank you for good advice Joyce and good poem.Christmashugs from Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/22/2011 10:23:00 AM
Very good comparison and giving some good advice to prevent this from happening in life..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad the book arrived safely and you are looking forward to reading..Sara
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Date: 12/21/2011 7:04:00 PM
I love you, Joyce, for real, namaste~N
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