Patience and Perseverance

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Written 15 September 2024

In the voyage of life when we set sail
Let patience allied with perseverance
Be the bacon light for us to avail
In the warm summer of exuberance
As in the wild, wobbling winter of gloom
When wilful wintry winds whirl us to doom;

When whooping waves waft the frame of our boat
Let's not give way to shadows of despair,
But hold on steadfast and keep on afloat;
When stormy gusts try our sails to lay bare
Let's brace ourselves with power of the will
And determination as a firm shield.

Let's not try to touch the sky at a stretch
As we may never meet the horizon,
Let's not try heaven to reach at a breath
As we may tumble in the ocean,
Let's move on step by step as the clock's chime,
Sail on steadily, a knot at a time.

Patience is a gift bestowed by the Lord
A balm that soothes the soreness of stress
A precious jewel seemly to afford,
And perseverance the key to success
The spirit that drives man to sail ahead,
The essence of efforts that are sacred.

When setting sail on an unknown voyage
It's fitting to have faith in the dIvine,
Who escorts our steps at every life's stage
Ever guides our path across space and time
With patience to earn the Lord's sublime grace 
And with perseverance to win the race.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 9/17/2024 11:39:00 AM
Hello Krishnanand Guptar, so nice to meet you. Patience is important. We should keep on trying to be patience. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ This will be my fav.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/18/2024 12:04:00 PM
Hello Krishnanand, Guptar, You are welcome. Thanl you. So enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 9/18/2024 4:32:00 AM
Thank you a lot Darlene for visiting my page and for appreciating the poem. Wish you also a pleasant day.
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