Patience

he was patience
i could see that at first look

no frown upon his face
could anyone spot

noticed how he held
his mug of coffee
close with
swollen knuckled hands

he was happy to
oblige anyone
for any favor they asked

he was a patient man
sitting at the same
seat every day he came
to eat his  very same
eggs over hard and sausage
on the side

he was a comfort
the girls for he would
put up with no nonsense
to none that threatened
no matter who they were

for a year and 1 day i saw
him in the same way 
and then on the 366th day
he came no more

he was a patient man
they say he killed himself
in the back of the store
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Richards Avatar
December 7, 2008 at 1:32 PM
What a sad fate...a sad ending to this poem. Well done with your writing, and congratulations on this one being featured this week! ~Carrie
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December 5, 2008 at 5:35 PM
Dear Janetta - Congratulations on your featured write this week! Peace always and may you and your loved ones have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John
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December 5, 2008 at 5:34 PM
Dear Janetta. A heart wrenching story. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
Mason Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 4:18 PM
WOW what an incredible tale you've written here Janetta ... you captured the essence of a tortured soul. We can only hope he is in a better place ... thanks for writing this and thanks to the Soup for selecting it to be featured this week. Congratulations to you!
Brown Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 4:25 PM
Wow. Horrible surprise ending. So sorry if this is true. Awesome poetry. Congrats on a great featured write. Love, Shar
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December 1, 2008 at 2:01 PM
What a sad and surprising end. A calm exterior does not always reveal the turmoil within. This is a powerful poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Karen
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December 1, 2008 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations Janetta on this melancholy write "Patience" being featured. God Bless. Vince
Jordan Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 10:09 PM
Janetta congrats on having this amazing poem/story featured this week - God Bless
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