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Patience

People practice patience And it is the only way To become a patient person Is what the experts say... Expecting to be patient and Never practicing Can be like chasing unicorns Every night in dreams August 19, 2018 Acrostic/Quatrain Contest #1 By Savannah Brown

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Date: 12/4/2020 11:53:00 AM
Lol exactly! Good one Susan!
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Date: 9/20/2018 2:24:00 PM
Wise words, Susan; with a lovely final simile.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 9/28/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 8/20/2018 1:17:00 PM
Nicely done, Susan, best of luck in the contest. John
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/22/2018 2:24:00 AM
Thanks, John.
Date: 8/20/2018 5:54:00 AM
Susan, your patience acrostic is so true but written in a way that made me smile!!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/22/2018 2:23:00 AM
Thank you, LM. I'm glad I made you smile.
Date: 8/20/2018 12:45:00 AM
You are really talented! Great job!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/22/2018 2:22:00 AM
Thank you, Mike.
Date: 8/19/2018 8:41:00 PM
Very creative, Susan! Janice
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/22/2018 2:22:00 AM
Thank you, Janice.
Date: 8/19/2018 2:34:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/22/2018 2:21:00 AM
Thanks, Line.
Date: 8/19/2018 1:56:00 PM
I think I have abused the art of patience ...it's so important to balance...Nice write...Susan
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/22/2018 2:21:00 AM
:) Thank you.
Date: 8/19/2018 1:47:00 PM
I love how you did this. I think I am gonna get N/A on mine now!! Everyone seems to be doing such nice double quatrains!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/20/2018 7:40:00 PM
Oh thanks, Andea! Appreciate that you do.
Date: 8/19/2018 10:01:00 AM
Great one Susan :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/20/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi
Date: 8/19/2018 3:56:00 AM
You've got to have lots of patience...especially if you're a Doctor lol...great write my friend...best of luck...^WW^
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/20/2018 7:39:00 PM
That is true. Thank you!
Date: 8/19/2018 3:10:00 AM
Enjoyed this one - especially the chasing unicorns. Besh wishes - its the mead I;,m drinking !!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/20/2018 7:38:00 PM
Thank you.

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