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Patience

i could simply stand

but inaction gnaws my bones

to my great expense


July 12, 2017

Copyright © Andrew Jacob Jung | Year Posted 2018

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August 6, 2018 at 10:22 AM

Congratulations on your top win! :)

August 6, 2018 at 2:11 AM

Nicely done, Andrew,I feel the pain; congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

August 5, 2018 at 7:46 AM

Nice one... congratulation.

August 5, 2018 at 7:00 AM

Love the middle line!

Virginia Waters

August 4, 2018 at 12:54 AM

Cool - well expressed

August 3, 2018 at 10:03 PM

Love it, Andrew. Congrats on your top win.

August 3, 2018 at 4:07 PM

That is a clever one Andrew, nice one for a top win, regards, Kevin

August 3, 2018 at 2:39 PM

Andrew, congratulations on your first place win!

Andrea Dietrich

August 3, 2018 at 2:32 PM

Very cool middle line, Andrew. Congrats on the outstanding win. ( I hate doing nothing too)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 3, 2018 at 11:53 AM

Ooh that's GOOD! Awesome Senryu, congrats on your first place win Andrew! :) xomo

July 13, 2018 at 4:22 PM

Andrew, your write made me restless waiting. Maybe I'm too impatient!

July 13, 2018 at 9:15 AM

Patience is hard to come by when you are ready to move about, well said

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