Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Pathways

Pathways, so many we can take
Some we choose, put our life at stake
The importance of what is sought
Can go against what we were taught
There is a way through what is low
Tunnels that bring us dark below
To keep on going to the light
That waits at the end, out of sight
Knowing it is there is the key
To create our own destiny
Knowing it is there is the key

*8 syllables each line

Heidi Sands

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Mike Hauser November 29, 2016 at 6:50 AM Another nice piece

Nette Onclaud November 28, 2016 at 12:10 PM an encouraging write so woven well, heidi.. follow your bliss!..huggs Heidi Sands November 28, 2016 at 1:13 PM Thank you for your visit and comment - Nette :)

Chris Green November 28, 2016 at 10:30 AM The repeated lines are so very true. That is the key to following the pathway no matter how dark it gets. Nicely done Heidi. Heidi Sands November 28, 2016 at 11:16 AM Thanks , Chris! :)

David Bose November 28, 2016 at 8:47 AM Nice, truthful, too. I like how the last line is a repeat of two above: apt emphasis. Thanks, Dave Heidi Sands November 28, 2016 at 9:01 AM Hi Dave. Thanks ! :)

Phil Capitano November 28, 2016 at 8:38 AM Nice! Smooth and creative. Destiny is the key. Heidi Sands November 28, 2016 at 9:01 AM Thanks , Phil! Yes it is. :)