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Pathways

Pathways, so many we can take Some we choose, put our life at stake The importance of what is sought Can go against what we were taught There is a way through what is low Tunnels that bring us dark below To keep on going to the light That waits at the end, out of sight Knowing it is there is the key To create our own destiny Knowing it is there is the key *8 syllables each line Heidi Sands

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Date: 11/29/2016 6:50:00 AM
Another nice piece
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Date: 11/28/2016 12:10:00 PM
an encouraging write so woven well, heidi.. follow your bliss!..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment - Nette :)
Date: 11/28/2016 10:30:00 AM
The repeated lines are so very true. That is the key to following the pathway no matter how dark it gets. Nicely done Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2016 11:16:00 AM
Thanks , Chris! :)
Date: 11/28/2016 8:47:00 AM
Nice, truthful, too. I like how the last line is a repeat of two above: apt emphasis. Thanks, Dave
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2016 9:01:00 AM
Hi Dave. Thanks ! :)
Date: 11/28/2016 8:38:00 AM
Nice! Smooth and creative. Destiny is the key.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2016 9:01:00 AM
Thanks , Phil! Yes it is. :)

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