Pathway To Heaven

The sunshines so bright
I walk the path to Heaven
To be with my LORD
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Breidenthal Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 6:23 PM
What a celestial, hopeful haiku to have read today. Always, Laura
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 6:29 PM
Yes, the path is going to be THAT bright, HG.
Brown Avatar
August 12, 2009 at 10:14 AM
Beautiful Haiku HG my forever friend. Love, Carol
Neal Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 7:05 PM
Thanks for your comment. Yes, we write together. Raul and Abe are photographers and artists. We have writing sessions and write about things they've captured. Raul is the engine of our creative patterns. It all intertwines. It's a lot fun writing with friends. There is more to write about it seems when you collaborate. Haiku and Senryu are our favorites. DN
Christian Avatar
December 19, 2008 at 12:16 PM
oh so sweet and greatly writtnen from diane
George   Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 3:02 PM
You touched my heart with these words, my friend. Warm wishes to you during this season as we Celebration our Saviour's Birth. Much love, Lainie
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December 18, 2008 at 12:27 PM
So much said in just three lines. Wonderful message. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind words regarding my cinquain. Keep on writing! Merry Christmas! Karen
Gorelick Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 6:33 AM
Nicely done . I like your idea. I'm having computer problems so may or may not be able to get back to you . But, Xlaimp for now. BG
Gorelick Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 6:32 AM
Nicely done . I like your idea. I'm having computer problems so may or may not be able to get back to you . But, Xlaimp for now. BG
Moreno Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 2:38 AM
Excellent haiku, I love this form, if you ever get a chance, come check mine out...Raul
Mclaughlin Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 11:50 PM
very nice devotional piece.
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