Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Pathway Through Autumn -

Our senses are activated  
The path I walk is not untouched
A path that will never be overgrown
Golden yellow, moist aspen leaf covers the ground
The sun casts its rays between the trees
the whole landscape looks alike a painting

Attention is changing
Are you an autumn person,
you will definitely enjoy this day
A color play that makes an impression
on most people who love nature

The imagination comes alive
Can you hear, the beaver strikes with its tail in the water
The cold has left its mark on nature
Relentless death, is glowing in the wind
The longing, whispering silently through my mind
A fireplace and a blanket are a sure winner







23.10.2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Still-Life Autumn Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
3rd place in the contest

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Howard Kerr January 6, 2021 at 5:38 PM Anne-Lise, This picturesque work deserves every accolade. Well done. Your soupmail on Jack Frost Howler is very much appreciated. Happy New Year Howard

Heidi Sands October 26, 2020 at 6:51 AM So nice! Congratulations for your win :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:12 AM - Thank you very much for the congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper October 25, 2020 at 9:26 PM Sunshine, congratulations on your win, great imagery . Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:13 AM - Thank you very much for my place on your winning list, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera October 25, 2020 at 9:00 PM I am here, Anne-Lise, to congratulate you on your great placement in this contest!! Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:11 AM - Thank you very much for the congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser October 24, 2020 at 9:25 PM It all must pass, to nurture new growth in Spring; beautifully done, very smooth read. Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:11 AM - Many thanks for the comments, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Fenn October 24, 2020 at 6:42 PM Hi Anne-Lise Sunshine Smile! This is a gorgeous poem! I love the imagery all through it. Beautiful picture to go with it. Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:10 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Jennifer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera October 24, 2020 at 5:30 PM A vivid representation of Autumn, Anne-Lise! Good Luck in the contest!! Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:10 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2020 at 5:25 PM you conveyed the mood of Autumn splendidly. I winner in my book! Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:10 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. October 24, 2020 at 10:55 AM Hi Anne-Lise, You described the “Autumn “ Season very well in this well written piece. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:09 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome October 24, 2020 at 10:39 AM Lovely visual write and stunning picture.Love the beaver.Even in autumn and cold winter. Beauty abounds among the decay. if only we open our eyes and hearts. Love the last stanzas. Such a wonderful cozy image. Very well one. hope you won. take care. Pete. Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:09 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney October 24, 2020 at 6:28 AM An Anthology of Autumn in one poem. It carried me away. Hugs, SuZ Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:08 AM - Many thanks for the comments, SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh October 24, 2020 at 5:59 AM I do love this so, sweet lady. It's a blessing to read... so rich with beauty that leaves impressions of joy on my mind. Lovely writing. God bless you Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:08 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One October 24, 2020 at 4:55 AM This is a lovely poem and has so much vivid imagery... I agree with the cold bringing death... Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:08 AM - Many thanks for the comments, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Curtis Johnson October 24, 2020 at 4:16 AM Hi, Sunshine. I enjoyed this. My eyes could see, and my heart could feel the movements of nature. Blessings. Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:07 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Curtis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar October 23, 2020 at 10:59 PM Such visual scenes. A beautiful poem. ~~ Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:07 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley October 23, 2020 at 8:52 PM Anne-Lise, gorgeous imagery graces your Autumn poem. Your last line is especially amazing. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:07 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Quoth Theraven October 23, 2020 at 8:43 PM Anne-Lise, An Autumn path we all long to walk. -Richard Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:06 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit October 23, 2020 at 3:07 PM Beautiful glimpses of autumn--splendidly done, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:06 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan October 23, 2020 at 1:37 PM I am most definitely an Autumn person. Your verses are as lovely as the picture you've chosen to accompany them, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:06 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham October 23, 2020 at 1:16 PM Perfect autumn verse Anne, I like nothing better than to walk in the woods to see the amazing colours. Enjoy your weekend Tom Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:05 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison October 23, 2020 at 1:07 PM what a gorgeous description of Autumn and I love the pic Anne- Lise its my favourite time of year, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2020 at 5:05 AM - Many thanks for the comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)