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Photograph Road in the forest by Tamas Filep ( ArtoFTom ) on 500px

Our senses are activated The path I walk is not untouched A path that will never be overgrown Golden yellow, moist aspen leaf covers the ground The sun casts its rays between the trees the whole landscape looks alike a painting Attention is changing Are you an autumn person, you will definitely enjoy this day A color play that makes an impression on most people who love nature The imagination comes alive Can you hear, the beaver strikes with its tail in the water The cold has left its mark on nature Relentless death, is glowing in the wind The longing, whispering silently through my mind A fireplace and a blanket are a sure winner 23.10.2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Still-Life Autumn Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper 3rd place in the contest

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Date: 10/26/2020 6:51:00 AM
So nice! Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:12:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/25/2020 9:26:00 PM
Sunshine, congratulations on your win, great imagery . Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:13:00 AM
- Thank you very much for my place on your winning list, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/25/2020 9:00:00 PM
I am here, Anne-Lise, to congratulate you on your great placement in this contest!!
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:11:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2020 9:25:00 PM
It all must pass, to nurture new growth in Spring; beautifully done, very smooth read.
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:11:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2020 6:42:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise Sunshine Smile! This is a gorgeous poem! I love the imagery all through it. Beautiful picture to go with it.
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:10:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Jennifer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2020 5:30:00 PM
A vivid representation of Autumn, Anne-Lise! Good Luck in the contest!!
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:10:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2020 5:25:00 PM
you conveyed the mood of Autumn splendidly. I winner in my book!
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:10:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2020 10:55:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, You described the “Autumn “ Season very well in this well written piece. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:09:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2020 10:39:00 AM
Lovely visual write and stunning picture.Love the beaver.Even in autumn and cold winter. Beauty abounds among the decay. if only we open our eyes and hearts. Love the last stanzas. Such a wonderful cozy image. Very well one. hope you won. take care. Pete.
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:09:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2020 6:28:00 AM
An Anthology of Autumn in one poem. It carried me away. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:08:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2020 5:59:00 AM
I do love this so, sweet lady. It's a blessing to read... so rich with beauty that leaves impressions of joy on my mind. Lovely writing. God bless you
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:08:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2020 4:55:00 AM
This is a lovely poem and has so much vivid imagery... I agree with the cold bringing death...
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:08:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2020 4:16:00 AM
Hi, Sunshine. I enjoyed this. My eyes could see, and my heart could feel the movements of nature. Blessings.
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Curtis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2020 10:59:00 PM
Such visual scenes. A beautiful poem. ~~
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2020 8:52:00 PM
Anne-Lise, gorgeous imagery graces your Autumn poem. Your last line is especially amazing. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2020 8:43:00 PM
Anne-Lise, An Autumn path we all long to walk. -Richard
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2020 3:07:00 PM
Beautiful glimpses of autumn--splendidly done, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2020 1:37:00 PM
I am most definitely an Autumn person. Your verses are as lovely as the picture you've chosen to accompany them, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2020 1:16:00 PM
Perfect autumn verse Anne, I like nothing better than to walk in the woods to see the amazing colours. Enjoy your weekend Tom
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:05:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2020 1:07:00 PM
what a gorgeous description of Autumn and I love the pic Anne- Lise its my favourite time of year, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/27/2020 5:05:00 AM
- Many thanks for the comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)