Pathos

Pathos cloud drifted in gloomy sky 
storm surged from the sagged horizon 
mind’s visage turned to destemmed leaf...
rain drops rolled in rills
made a stream of tear.

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February 5, 2019
For Bite Size Poem No. 45
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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July 17, 2019 at 11:52 AM
The imagery is amazing Subimal, congrats on a fine win!
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