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Pathetic

It wasn't what we wrote; that which was startling, or true, or even the stark cynical twist which grasped at the neck so early, but the fact that deep below was the cold pathetic marrow that ached and ached and we felt no shame in our therapy- writing page after page of neurotic fireworks, and very few, but the most low and dying really knew and felt The Grime, that slime and slithering evil of despair and medicated happiness, our poetic moments- that which we could bare, 'was', and 'is' why we will never be loved.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/28/2012 11:57:00 PM
I enjoyed your work tonight...thank you for posting.
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