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Pathetic

My bloodshot mind sees all, screaming from the center of my personal hell. The cloud keeps raining black and blue, mixing tears with blood- both shed over you. And the pain keeps mushrooming out and away; scars of ebony flames seal over my way out. But still I see the black stars spreading hopeless over the midnight-white and the blossoming flower rooted in my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/25/2009 9:06:00 PM
Sad thoughts, but beautifully expressed!
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Date: 3/1/2009 8:27:00 AM
I felt this write, like I've been there. A very good write Micaela
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Date: 2/25/2009 2:08:00 PM
like this poem because of the concept and it had feelings to it. like te first part the best My bloodshot mind sees all, screaming from the center of my personal hell
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Date: 2/23/2009 5:33:00 PM
wow deep stuff... ahh depression... bad yet good for inspiration.. been there too girl.
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