Path Through Greening Hills Haiku

path through greening hills raptor glides on silent wing- smoke plume in distance
for the Nature contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Austin Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 1:37 PM
Marvelous and suggestive. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Poet Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 6:37 AM
Congrats Barbara on your well deserved win with this wonderful Haiku---kashinath
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:47 PM
One of the best, Barbara. Congatulations on this one. LUv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:24 PM
wonderful imagery Barbara, congrats on your win in the contest
Mehta Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of carol, Barbara
Ruebel Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:33 AM
Hello B arbara, This is just b eautiful, congratulations on your win in the contest As Always, Shar
Freeman Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:19 AM
Beautiful job Barbara! It's so great to see you in the top three. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored third place victory in Carol's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 7:23 AM
Congrats BG on your third place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry full of great imagery and warm lines.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..
Mannan Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 7:06 AM
BG This sure was a winner. Many congratulations for this win.
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:15 AM
Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Barbara. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 7:52 AM
Amazing image that recalls Jurassic Park, dear LNC. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 7:31 AM
Good luck in the contest Barbara with this Dinosaur gem....:)
Kendrick Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 5:50 AM
Reads like winning material..I especially like the second line..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 11:31 PM
I really like yours, Barbara, one of the best!
R Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 9:42 PM
lovely. enjoyed.
Maverick Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 9:27 PM
enjoyed this in raptures, thru turn of pinionless pages as through the ages enjoyed your write today Barbara, and tanka you.
Mannan Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 8:51 PM
What a beautiful scene BG. Raptor glides on silent wing Wow. All the best.
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