Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Path of Thoughts

I reached out my window and opened my hand..
                                        Then caught a raindrop that could not land..
                                            I held it tight till it soaked in my palm..
                                       Then it faded away as the mood turned calm..
                                     Through the crack in the door the light spilled in..
                                 It highlighted the path where my thoughts once been..

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Sami Helbaoui September 25, 2011 at 5:48 AM You have my thumbs up for this one :D It's amazing and i love the scenery.

Dinda Minardi September 21, 2011 at 11:12 PM Wow. Love this one! how the raindrop fall and caught up, how it's gone... great writing.

Nette Onclaud September 18, 2011 at 1:04 PM adorable , love the way this swings gently and soulfully, michael... :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 18, 2011 at 11:45 AM fascinating and alluring words Michael luv.. wonderful imaginative lines of intensity .. my W.K. has fashioned a masterpiece once more.. your Jersey Girl is rooting for G-MEN ..hope they don't disappoint.. but know for sure my W.K. never disappoints ..with luv.. xoxo..

Lee Ramage September 18, 2011 at 12:59 AM Michael, your work is inspiring. I am enjoying my evening tonight reading your work. Well done. Lee

Andrea Dietrich September 18, 2011 at 12:58 AM this is most interesting and a very thoughful poem. I really like it!

Fabiyas M V September 17, 2011 at 10:28 PM I could visualize the scene you painted with words,Falotico.Nice comparison of rain drop with 'mood'.I enjoyed it.It's my request .Please read my poems a few and send a review to '[email protected] may publish it in my book,which is going to be published in Kerala,India.

Ilene Bauer September 17, 2011 at 5:43 PM i like your rhyme and the peaceful mood of this poem. nice write!

Cory Long September 17, 2011 at 5:09 PM this is awesome.. I really like it. cory

Audrey Haick September 17, 2011 at 4:46 PM Exquisite Rhyme, Michael!! Really beautiful imagery matching the flow. Lovely as usual. Love, Annalise

Chiquitachiamaka Baity September 17, 2011 at 4:16 PM Tender poem Michael..really lovely..thanks for sharing....smiles...chiquita

Carrie Richards September 17, 2011 at 4:13 PM Oh my....I love this. It is a gentle poem, that fills me with a sense of thoughtfulness and peace. :)