Path of Man

Hold close your burdens, dearest friend
For every ounce, a pound you send
Beyond what's known, and further still
Most humble man, His shoes you fill




12/30/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Chircop Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 4:09 PM
So glad to be here reading your thoughts..awesome
Singleton Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 7:32 PM
Love it James!
Guzzi Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 6:30 PM
Hope your New Year is going grand..Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 1:09 PM
Nice Jimbo xx
Kovrlija Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 2:37 AM
Deep and wise thoughts!
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 3:36 PM
Great write, great message, James! Have a very very happy new year! God bless you and your family! Hanitra
Guzzi Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 3:47 PM
A very profound one Jimbo! Happy New Year! Light & Love
Palmer Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 10:19 AM
great message James,love it,happy new year
Horsman Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 7:51 AM
Jimbo, this is awesome love the message,, have a happy new year..
Tsiluma Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 12:20 AM
Beautifully stated Jimbo! It puts things into perspective very well.
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 9:57 PM
Very good message, Jim. And I liked what you said about the thrush!
Ryerson Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 7:16 PM
Very insightful and profound Jimbo...we must learn to be thankful for it all...Tim
Williams Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 1:44 PM
Jimbo very profound, I like, have a happy and peaceful New Year...David
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