Pastoral Passage - Church Crypt

Butterfly wing door vestibule builds anticipation  
Shuffled, carpet muffled greetings, familiar embraces                     
Piloted by Holy Spirit, seated hushed congregation 
Ritual of ornate cathedral thanks hidden crypt rib cage 
 
Enduring centuries, pliable sandstone testiment
God's following holds time proof tenacity
Flared proud corners, pyramid reminiscent 
Honour continues amidst shifting society

Solid oak panelled door on wrought iron hinges
Greets round barrel key bearer with ominous groan
Down four slouching stone steps from street edge
Solo visit in sacred space never partaken alone

Curved bookcases cater for leather bound learning
Volumes of theology define best ways
Nook with desk lets liturgist imbibe God's word
Tall back chair, acorn emblems engraved

Beneath majestic vessel, clay damp chamber
Rhubarb velvet curtain, tassel tied to sides
Strongest entity relies on the Lord as Saviour
With worship's dedication, faith survives

In expansion, searcher emerges at alter, cleansed
Hive of etched arches tribute precision architectural
Vibrant robes, sashes draped, silken beacons
Of preparation, celebration of overcoming, renewal

Pulpit's ingrained memory both daunting and welcoming
Deep set lead light showers sombre pews in intimacy
Haloed Christ holds baby, shares parables with children
Crease covered hymn books strum procedural symphony

           

Written July 2020 (no previous submission) 

Submitted for : Brian Strand
 
Completely New Volume 23
on 18th August 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Herrick Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 12:54 AM
I could actually smell of this Hallowed place as you brought it forth (vivid) and with stunning accompaniment, incense. ~Jude
Ermine Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 1:26 AM
So sweet of you. Thank you, Jude.
La France Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Sigrid, congratulations on having your wonderful poem selected as a Featured Poem this week, enjoy the honor, a FAV for me _Constance
Ermine Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 7:27 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. That's extremely kind
Kauffman Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 10:53 PM
Sigrid this is breathtalking in the imagery and the emotion that carries us through this beautiful worship place. Congratulations on your winning placement! Well deserved.
Ermine Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 11:12 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. Admire your work a lot, looking forward to reading more of it.
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 8:46 AM
Congrats on your placement in Brian's contest with your majestic pastoral pen, Sigrid! Grandeur and Glory, Gershon
Ermine Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 6:42 PM
Quick examination of house of mighty force. Ta, Gershon.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 8:51 PM
What a beautiful church your imagination has either recalled or created.
Ermine Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 9:13 PM
Thank you, Caren.! Yes, from faint small child memories, my father had the crypt key. I should probably watch some You Tube clips, but that can sometimes jeopardise ability to express well.
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