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Pastel Reflections

I'll be waiting here
wading through the seasons 
Seems I can't recall the
      reasons you aren't here with me 

As I watch the trees
turn from gold,   -  to brown,     -  a leaf falls down
swirling around, catching a tear it's found 

Sometimes even love
is like a leaf that's tossed in the wind...
So lost, it crumbles into a broken dream-               

Days have tumbled down
I've wondered how to live without you
Winter - summer -  spring, -  and fall  -  have come again

Trees are losing leaves
Each one had a story
They have learned to say goodbye, without the sound of tears

I have watched the leaves
drifting from the trees, then fall on down
without a song, to say goodbye....    goodbye

All the while, I wait
Just searching for a sign in the wind
Beneath my feet the earth has turned to gold and red

Leaves have turned from gold
and I am growing cold, in the rain
Tears from trees fall down around my head, again

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Seasons pass on by
But l'll keep believing
Hoping that the spring might bring a second chance with you

I have watched the leaves
lifting from the trees, then falling down
without a song, to say goodbye....        goodbye

I am watching leaves
lifting from the trees
gone, without a  song.........  gone, without a song         to say goodbye........




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6/15/15  For the Contest: Pastel Reflections
Sponsor- Craig Cornish
Inspired by the music of Kevin Kern "Pastel Reflections"
(Be sure to listen to this beautiful music)....  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WQ6owzWtjIs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/16/2015 8:00:00 PM
Pure perfection, Carrie! Worthy as can be of the first place. Flows as effortlessly I say as the leaves falling. Listened to the music while reading and had absolutely no trouble following. Well done.
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Date: 7/16/2015 1:03:00 PM
congratulations on your lovely poem and win. I truly enjoyed. I am slowly coming back to being able to type a few lines and to read and comment. I had my concussion in March and my broken arm on Easter and have been out of commission all spring and summer. I will never catch up. Love, Joyce
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Carrie Richards
Date: 7/16/2015 1:31:00 PM
Dear Joyce, I'm so sorry you have had such a long winter and spring recovering, and do hope day by day, you feel stronger and able to catch your breath. You have been missed !! God Bless !!
Date: 7/14/2015 1:55:00 AM
Carrie, Congrats on your "Pastel Reflection Win." always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/13/2015 2:24:00 PM
Hi Carrie...I read this lyric the first day you published it several weeks ago and the powerful imagery and strong message has stayed with me...congrats on your well placed melody (added to my favourite poems - with a '7') into first place...cheers, Tbang
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Date: 7/13/2015 1:21:00 PM
Yes, Congs on winning I LOVED THIS POEM Hugs Bryan Loves
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Date: 7/12/2015 10:47:00 PM
Wonderful lyric,,a poetic marvel Carrie! Congrats on first place win!
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Date: 7/12/2015 9:13:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your Pastel Reflections win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 7/12/2015 8:05:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Carrie! I really enjoyed singing this (in my admittedly a bit off-key voice) while playing the melody too! Congrats on your top win! hugs!
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Date: 7/12/2015 5:10:00 PM
I found your lyrics utterly beautiful, Carrie! You wade through the seasons, hoping...pretending that love will come around again. ~ Congratulations on being classified in first place! // paul
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Date: 7/12/2015 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, a beautiful poem, I found this one to be difficult with the melody having a pause then a few more notes you seemed to have solved it..well done
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Carrie Richards
Date: 7/12/2015 1:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Frederic.....yes, these songs are tricky to write for, I have listened over and over to the music, and find it so beautiful and sad! I do enjoy this kind of challenge. Thank you for all your kindness on many of my poems. I never take your thoughtfulness for granted ! :)
Date: 7/12/2015 1:35:00 PM
congratulations Carrie on your lyrics interpretation for this song, and win,well done.
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Date: 7/12/2015 12:39:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your very well deserved top spot:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/16/2015 11:16:00 AM
Can only describe this as a masterpiece Carrie am blown away by these lyrics - it really would make a wonderful song -good luck in the contest - a 7 and faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/16/2015 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Jan. This is the one I had to remove earlier, and re-submit because of editing issues ! Wish I knew what was going on with my computer !

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