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hmmm...i've got to write
something other than haiku...
which...seems as old shoe

like...records and tape
those analog recordings...
just...music as played

now...digital reigns
with it's perfect micro-beat...
seems...a sound defeat

no...that is context
of understanding content...
hmmm...haiku's my vent


stan sand

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James Horn Date: 12/7/2018 7:48:00 AM Your son is good at playing with words. Interesting. Without our consent, Have a lousy president; So much money spent. Have been intending, Economy descending; Him apprehending. Need another crutch We lived and have learned so much; When dating go Dutch. Login to Reply Sand Blown Date: 12/7/2018 11:26:00 PM do dee do dee doo doo...ah don't have a son : ) twas a spelling error...

Caren Krutsinger Date: 12/6/2018 12:59:00 AM An oxymoron in the form of haiku. Nicely built, my friend. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/5/2018 5:49:00 PM loved the play of words with sound defeat!! Also it's fun to rhyme them like eyou did. Login to Reply Sand Blown Date: 12/5/2018 9:40:00 PM thanks andrea...my email is acting up...will try again tomorrow

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/5/2018 2:20:00 PM way out of the borders of a 'ku...nicely done, sand...huggs Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/5/2018 11:31:00 AM Creative work. Enjoyed reading this one. Sara Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/5/2018 9:44:00 AM I like it! :) Login to Reply