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hmmm...i've got to write something other than haiku... which...seems as old shoe like...records and tape those analog recordings... just...music as played now...digital reigns with it's perfect micro-beat... seems...a sound defeat no...that is context of understanding content... hmmm...haiku's my vent stan sand

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Date: 12/7/2018 7:48:00 AM
Your son is good at playing with words. Interesting. Without our consent, Have a lousy president; So much money spent. Have been intending, Economy descending; Him apprehending. Need another crutch We lived and have learned so much; When dating go Dutch.
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Date: 12/7/2018 11:26:00 PM
do dee do dee doo doo...ah don't have a son : ) twas a spelling error...
Date: 12/6/2018 12:59:00 AM
An oxymoron in the form of haiku. Nicely built, my friend.
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Date: 12/5/2018 5:49:00 PM
loved the play of words with sound defeat!! Also it's fun to rhyme them like eyou did.
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:40:00 PM
thanks andrea...my email is acting up...will try again tomorrow
Date: 12/5/2018 2:20:00 PM
way out of the borders of a 'ku...nicely done, sand...huggs
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Date: 12/5/2018 11:31:00 AM
Creative work. Enjoyed reading this one. Sara
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:44:00 AM
I like it! :)
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