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Past Passion

Go now, turn the photo albums pages. You often smile at happy memories. Let the images rekindle the stages, Never lost, love..within my heart's reverie. Would that we could return to bygone days. I would do anything to turn that page. Love know, my thoughts of us set nights ablaze. Past passion, left my broken heart engaged. The years are long, and still, the pages turn. Relive those brighter memories and come. Could the ever after be, oh I yearn .. We each can see the love in our album. Only you, it is yours, my broken heart, If you wish a Valentine take the dart. *Key to message: Read the bolded first words of each line from the bottom up. If only We Could Relive The Past Love, I Would Never Let You Go Date: 1/20/13

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Date: 2/12/2013 6:17:00 PM
What a great piece, enjoyed it very much!! GypsyofEssence
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Date: 2/8/2013 1:23:00 PM
bien... beau!!!
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Date: 1/31/2013 4:32:00 PM
Debbie congrats on your won. A beautiful poem you wrote. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/30/2013 8:50:00 PM
Beautiful poem Debbie. Nice to be back reading some favourites. Take care, hope you have a nice Valentine's Day. Lee
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Date: 1/30/2013 8:54:00 AM
Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.
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Date: 1/27/2013 11:01:00 AM
writing sonnets and that too with wonderful experimentation and rhyme is truly a challenge.... I sure admire this. Excellent win!! congratulations....., Mehnaz
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Date: 1/27/2013 12:05:00 AM
Mindboggling, Debbie, to write a sonnet, rhyming and with a message in it in the reverse order. Congrats for the win with this gem!! Jag
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Date: 1/26/2013 10:00:00 PM
Congratulations for a very creative and lovely Valentines Poem and awesome win my dear Deb! Thanks for sharing it, too! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 1/26/2013 8:38:00 PM
Dear Deb, this wonderful and creative entry is most deserving of top honors. Congratulations! This conest was a real challenge and l am not sure l did mine correctly.
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Date: 1/26/2013 5:05:00 PM
Pilot to Co-pilot : Well done!!! Whooot Whooot !!! Highness you're tops!! Big hug love you bunches. Cap'n Deb.
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Date: 1/26/2013 4:47:00 PM
Debbie... congratulations in Suzette's sweet sweet " VALENTINE" contest. Always & forever * LINDA
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Date: 1/26/2013 4:12:00 PM
Okay cher..you got my brain hurting again...how the heck do you pull THIS one off? (and reversed too!) It's simply not fair and I protest vehemently...how come you gotta be so damn good?
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Date: 1/26/2013 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your Ist Place win with this beauty! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/26/2013 10:53:00 AM
Excellent and Wonderful piece,Debbie..Great work and message...Congrats on your superb win....
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Date: 1/26/2013 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win! Very clever, well deserved!
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Date: 1/26/2013 9:19:00 AM
Ahhh....a melancholy wish, that can't go back in time! Lovely piece...Congrats to you!
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Date: 1/26/2013 8:14:00 AM
I like this one a lot, the hidden message is a hidden gem. Well done Debbie!
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Date: 1/26/2013 6:47:00 AM
congrats on your win Debble
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Date: 1/24/2013 1:35:00 PM
Strong emotions in this one Debbie, and beautifully written, sigh! The key message is wonderfully touching :)
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Date: 1/24/2013 8:40:00 AM
This is so beautiful ma... I love your romantic side..OOSH SMOOCH :00)
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Date: 1/23/2013 10:02:00 PM
Wow.. great! Wish I would have never let one go too but gives us something to write about! Beautiful
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Date: 1/22/2013 11:44:00 PM
'Past passion, left my broken heart engaged.' Paradox redefined. buriful peice
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Date: 1/22/2013 10:19:00 PM
looking at your great sonnet idea again. Debs, the reason I did not make that one poem of mine into a sonnet was because of the restrictions on the lines. I think it called for 12 lines only. Otherwise, i probably would have wanted to make it a sonnet!
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Date: 1/22/2013 3:20:00 AM
You may let love go BUT love never let us GO! Memories is the tresure of our lives! Beautiful poem, loved it! Thank you!
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Date: 1/22/2013 12:18:00 AM
Debbie, I guess at some time or the other each of us has one of those. Stellar write, great one. Thanks for reading my poem and glad you like. I have relocated both at job and living. From Ontario to Alberta, so I am still adjusting to new living and work, which takes up a lot of my time. From time to time, however, I will be popping in until I get things settled. One love. Joy Wells
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