Past Nightfall

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On Halloween, I heard of a guesthouse advertising stays in a haunted house. Spend one night, get a year's lodgings for free, I was sure it was mere hyperbole. Its decrepit looks failed to frighten me, so I decided to ask for a key. And upon opening a daunting door, my footstep drew squeaks from a creaking floor. There was no hydro, only an oil lamp, and the furniture felt filthy and damp. But I proceeded to explore the halls, checking out smells seeping out of the walls. I heard garbled whispers and muffled screams; the kind of things one hears in nightmare dreams. A stench was oozing from cracks in the floor, as I searched the attic spattered with gore. My heart jumped; when shadows started to shift, causing reality to bend and drift. And as fear fuels the panic, I feel, I'm more and more convinced ghosts are real. I soon concluded that this wasn't funny; my life is worth much more than free money. So I quickly hightailed it out of there; if that makes me a coward, I don't care. You can call me nuts, but that house has spooks, those who've fled there, aren't just a bunch of kooks. And you'd be a fool to stay past nightfall; for I've seen things that would make your skin crawl.

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Date: 1/25/2019 6:34:00 PM
Great scenario, Emile. Congrats on your win. Well done.
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Date: 1/26/2019 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/23/2019 7:45:00 PM
Oooh, enjoyed reading this poem so much, Emile. It seems more "poetic" than some of the entries and certainly held my attention throughout. Also like your choice of the last two words as the title. Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/24/2019 5:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Carolyn, your comments are always appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/23/2019 7:32:00 PM
Nicely done, Emile, you have created great imagery and feeling on your well written poem. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/24/2019 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/23/2019 6:09:00 PM
Emile, I enjoyed your spooky write, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:28:00 PM
Thank you Tania, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/22/2019 2:01:00 PM
I would never call you nuts, Emile. I call you psychically "aware" which is important.
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Date: 1/22/2019 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Caren, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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