Past Mine Speak

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             Inching unto 
  the tumid capstones of hern 
             pixie's plush

      quietly the genteel of i
               continues
            until her blush

        and her digits reach
           can you believe
         for the likes of me

         Touching my flesh
    where I had use to fright
  now this soul becomes flush
       deep into my sinews
          past mine speak

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Date: 1/13/2012 10:36:00 PM
I sure know how to spot them! You provide all the food my imagination can take but I do keep coming back for more. 'Pon my flesh I agonized.
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Date: 1/24/2010 11:24:00 AM
lovely poem,this woman must be a special one James,indeed deep..Charma
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Date: 1/23/2010 2:56:00 PM
Very DEEP indeed. This reads very interestingly. I will have to see more of your poetry. thanks for your great comments to me.andrea
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Date: 1/23/2010 1:12:00 PM
Very passionate short write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/22/2010 3:25:00 PM
Quite the romantic write, James. There must be a lucky lady blushing somewhere as well. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/22/2010 12:55:00 PM
good one!! Thanks for all the encouragement!!
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Date: 1/22/2010 12:41:00 PM
That's nice and spiritually sensual. Good rhyme. Lovingly, Dane Ann (And thanks for commenting on my poetry... the answer is I'm not sure... maybe so. Look up Poetic form: Clerihew.) Smiles...
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