Passion's Ardor

Standing at the ocean's edge
  He inhaled the air, raw and bracing
His love, faraway on yonder shore
  inhaled as well, her heart a-racing

A wonder that two hearts can feel
  the tide's mighty surge as they kneel
in reverence to their passion's ardor
  that kisses' wings, sure true love seals
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Proxenos Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 9:38 AM
Gershon, so sweet , as you both kneel, two hearts can feel, yet miles separate you - a sentimental write, well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Sands Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 2:46 PM
I love this beautiful poem. Well done Gershon :)
Wolf Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 6:27 PM
Heidi, your thoughtful comment means the world to me. Thank you so much, gw
Faulkner Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 8:44 PM
Glorious, gw!
Wolf Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 9:35 PM
Michelle, thank you. Your comment makes my evening! :) gw
Hankins Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:35 PM
Lovely thoughts, G.W. Well-written.
Wolf Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 9:34 PM
Thanks, Milt. I appreciate the assessment of a long-time poet like yourself on this one. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
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