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Passion's Ardor

Standing at the ocean's edge He inhaled the air, raw and bracing His love, faraway on yonder shore inhaled as well, her heart a-racing A wonder that two hearts can feel the tide's mighty surge as they kneel in reverence to their passion's ardor that kisses' wings, sure true love seals

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Date: 5/22/2021 9:38:00 AM
Gershon, so sweet , as you both kneel, two hearts can feel, yet miles separate you - a sentimental write, well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/20/2021 2:46:00 PM
I love this beautiful poem. Well done Gershon :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/20/2021 6:27:00 PM
Heidi, your thoughtful comment means the world to me. Thank you so much, gw
Date: 5/19/2021 8:44:00 PM
Glorious, gw!
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Date: 5/19/2021 9:35:00 PM
Michelle, thank you. Your comment makes my evening! :) gw
Date: 5/19/2021 7:35:00 PM
Lovely thoughts, G.W. Well-written.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/19/2021 9:34:00 PM
Thanks, Milt. I appreciate the assessment of a long-time poet like yourself on this one. Happiness and Joy, Gershon

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