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Passionku

you are watching paying attention is that how it is done start with a kiss working your way down will her screams fill the air in a dark room seeing with your hands can you find the right spot licking flicking articulate tongue will a word be spoken moaning loudly fire deep inside is his hose long enough bending backwards gymnastic marvel will she earn perfect 10

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/6/2016 8:40:00 PM

:) Back to read something from you, dear. Hope all is well. Haven't seen a new post from you. It's not the same without it. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2016 8:11:00 AM

Yes, all is well. We went to a film festival yesterday and watched a movie about how they made an orchestra from instruments made out of pieces of garbage. It was amazing and moving. Hugs back to you Eileen.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/23/2015 3:02:00 PM

Wow this is a passionate ooolala questionku, Richard! Is her name Nadia Comaneci?:) // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/23/2015 4:00:00 PM

Ha ha, I guess it could be.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 10/23/2015 10:18:00 AM

Hahaha soooo naughty....or maybe it's just me

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/23/2015 12:57:00 PM

No it's not just you, it is naughty. ;0)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 10/22/2015 7:32:00 AM

Still laughing at that last line. Great words. I'll put this aside in my favs, for tweeting later.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/22/2015 7:37:00 AM

Hi Scott, I'm glad I entertained you. Thanks for visiting.

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/22/2015 7:06:00 AM

Wow. Thermonuclear temp on this page, Rick! Btw, what's with the hose? lol!...So, there should be a string? I didn't see it said on your contest page...hugs!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/22/2015 7:39:00 AM

No single Questionku are also welcome. If there are multiple each should stand on their own.

James Custard

Date: 10/22/2015 4:57:00 AM

Passionate and risky. A great write.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/22/2015 7:40:00 AM

Thanks James, just a bit of silliness.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/21/2015 10:29:00 PM

Didn't know you have a contest going with your form, Richard. Will check it out. Did you change that last line....I could have sworn I read nose earlier....This makes more sense. My favorite is the one before the last....great write.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/22/2015 7:55:00 AM

Watching is indeed pleasurable, even more so when she knows your watching and is able to give herself completely to the experience. I added one more questionku.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/21/2015 10:38:00 PM

The first stanza is also very sensual to me. There is a bit of voyeurism there that is enticing.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2015 10:36:00 PM

Nope, it was the same. I like the same one myself. I'm pleased you like it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2015 1:36:00 AM

hahaha. I'm sorry , but the last one was just hilarious to me. After all that buildup and then the hose line!! this is also funny that people are telling you good luck in the very contest that you are sponsor of. well, it was great seeing these tonight. I had to double check to see if you use question marks or not. Why do you not put them, Richard?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/21/2015 8:31:00 AM

With haiku there is no punctuation or capitalization so I want it to bare some similarity.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/20/2015 9:32:00 PM

Nice piece. Wishing you best For the contest Anisha Dutta

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/20/2015 9:42:00 PM

Thanks Anisha.

Rob Carmack

Date: 10/20/2015 12:58:00 PM

Will he pull out in time? I once knew a man who didn't, and his son was named 'Chance'.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/20/2015 9:43:00 PM

It was either "Chance" or Oops.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/20/2015 10:51:00 AM

So nice! Really enjoyed Anisha Dutta

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/20/2015 12:23:00 PM

Thanks Anisha.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/20/2015 9:12:00 AM

X-rated..Reads like it will get the contest sponsor's attention..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/20/2015 9:33:00 AM

Ha ha, I am the sponsor so I guess in a way you are correct.

Brian Baumgarn

Date: 10/20/2015 1:59:00 AM

I would like to echo what Michael said about what Jack would say, "wowser." As an older guy, I think it made my socks drop!!

Brian Baumgarn
Date: 10/21/2015 2:11:00 AM

That's a funny story, Richard. There is a younger lady about 38 in our recovery group. She has used some of us older gents for guidance for three or so years. I commented that every time I saw her at a meeting my socks dropped. There are no secrets in AA. One morning when she was leaving she said, "gotta catch some sleep, like you. I work nights." And, you can pull your socks up now!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/20/2015 8:18:00 AM

Ha ha, as long as it is only your socks that have dropped.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/19/2015 11:35:00 PM

What excitement, as Jack Ellison would say"WOWSER!!!!"

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/20/2015 8:19:00 AM

Thanks Michael, much appreciated.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/19/2015 4:57:00 PM

to put out the fire. right? ...lol

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2015 8:02:00 PM

You got it Tim! *lol*

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/19/2015 4:44:00 PM

One would hope so on the last one,,these are amazing Richard, every one of them, one as to stop, reread, and reread, and they are still as fresh as the first time...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2015 8:03:00 PM

Thanks Harry, I had a number of people asking about the form so I wrote this to help out. I'm pleased you enjoyed my naughty piece.