Richard Lamoureux Poet Questionku

Passionku

you are watching
paying attention
is that how it is done

start with a kiss
working your way down
will her screams fill the air

in a dark room
seeing with your hands
can you find the right spot

licking flicking
articulate tongue
will a word be spoken 

moaning loudly 
fire deep inside
is his hose long enough

bending backwards
gymnastic marvel
will she earn perfect 10

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Eileen Manassian March 6, 2016 at 8:40 PM :) Back to read something from you, dear. Hope all is well. Haven't seen a new post from you. It's not the same without it. Hugs Richard Lamoureux March 7, 2016 at 8:11 AM Yes, all is well. We went to a film festival yesterday and watched a movie about how they made an orchestra from instruments made out of pieces of garbage. It was amazing and moving. Hugs back to you Eileen.

Paul Callus October 23, 2015 at 3:02 PM Wow this is a passionate ooolala questionku, Richard! Is her name Nadia Comaneci?:) // paul Richard Lamoureux October 23, 2015 at 4:00 PM Ha ha, I guess it could be.

Njeri Hunjeri October 23, 2015 at 10:18 AM Hahaha soooo naughty....or maybe it's just me Richard Lamoureux October 23, 2015 at 12:57 PM No it's not just you, it is naughty. ;0)

Scott Thirtyseven October 22, 2015 at 7:32 AM Still laughing at that last line. Great words. I'll put this aside in my favs, for tweeting later. Richard Lamoureux October 22, 2015 at 7:37 AM Hi Scott, I'm glad I entertained you. Thanks for visiting.

Kp Nunez October 22, 2015 at 7:06 AM Wow. Thermonuclear temp on this page, Rick! Btw, what's with the hose? lol!...So, there should be a string? I didn't see it said on your contest page...hugs! Richard Lamoureux October 22, 2015 at 7:39 AM No single Questionku are also welcome. If there are multiple each should stand on their own.

James Custard October 22, 2015 at 4:57 AM Passionate and risky. A great write. Richard Lamoureux October 22, 2015 at 7:40 AM Thanks James, just a bit of silliness.

Eileen Manassian October 21, 2015 at 10:29 PM Didn't know you have a contest going with your form, Richard. Will check it out. Did you change that last line....I could have sworn I read nose earlier....This makes more sense. My favorite is the one before the last....great write. Richard Lamoureux October 22, 2015 at 7:55 AM Watching is indeed pleasurable, even more so when she knows your watching and is able to give herself completely to the experience. I added one more questionku. Eileen Manassian October 21, 2015 at 10:38 PM The first stanza is also very sensual to me. There is a bit of voyeurism there that is enticing. Richard Lamoureux October 21, 2015 at 10:36 PM Nope, it was the same. I like the same one myself. I'm pleased you like it.

Andrea Dietrich October 21, 2015 at 1:36 AM hahaha. I'm sorry , but the last one was just hilarious to me. After all that buildup and then the hose line!! this is also funny that people are telling you good luck in the very contest that you are sponsor of. well, it was great seeing these tonight. I had to double check to see if you use question marks or not. Why do you not put them, Richard? Richard Lamoureux October 21, 2015 at 8:31 AM With haiku there is no punctuation or capitalization so I want it to bare some similarity.

Anisha Dutta October 20, 2015 at 9:32 PM Nice piece. Wishing you best For the contest Anisha Dutta Richard Lamoureux October 20, 2015 at 9:42 PM Thanks Anisha.

Rob Carmack October 20, 2015 at 12:58 PM Will he pull out in time? I once knew a man who didn't, and his son was named 'Chance'. Richard Lamoureux October 20, 2015 at 9:43 PM It was either "Chance" or Oops.

Anisha Dutta October 20, 2015 at 10:51 AM So nice! Really enjoyed Anisha Dutta Richard Lamoureux October 20, 2015 at 12:23 PM Thanks Anisha.

Sara Kendrick October 20, 2015 at 9:12 AM X-rated..Reads like it will get the contest sponsor's attention..Sara Richard Lamoureux October 20, 2015 at 9:33 AM Ha ha, I am the sponsor so I guess in a way you are correct.

Brian Baumgarn October 20, 2015 at 1:59 AM I would like to echo what Michael said about what Jack would say, "wowser." As an older guy, I think it made my socks drop!! Brian Baumgarn October 21, 2015 at 2:11 AM That's a funny story, Richard. There is a younger lady about 38 in our recovery group. She has used some of us older gents for guidance for three or so years. I commented that every time I saw her at a meeting my socks dropped. There are no secrets in AA. One morning when she was leaving she said, "gotta catch some sleep, like you. I work nights." And, you can pull your socks up now! Richard Lamoureux October 20, 2015 at 8:18 AM Ha ha, as long as it is only your socks that have dropped.

Michael Tor October 19, 2015 at 11:35 PM What excitement, as Jack Ellison would say"WOWSER!!!!" Richard Lamoureux October 20, 2015 at 8:19 AM Thanks Michael, much appreciated.

Tim Smith October 19, 2015 at 4:57 PM to put out the fire. right? ...lol Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2015 at 8:02 PM You got it Tim! *lol*

Harry Horsman October 19, 2015 at 4:44 PM One would hope so on the last one,,these are amazing Richard, every one of them, one as to stop, reread, and reread, and they are still as fresh as the first time... Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2015 at 8:03 PM Thanks Harry, I had a number of people asking about the form so I wrote this to help out. I'm pleased you enjoyed my naughty piece.

Mama Bear October 19, 2015 at 4:01 PM Baaaaaaad Boy!!! Noisy too from the sound of it. Think I will not visit for a while Can not take the stress of what I am missing. Love you Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2015 at 8:05 PM Ha ha, noisy is fun! I love you too mom.

Casarah Nance October 19, 2015 at 2:36 PM :)

Charmaine Chircop October 19, 2015 at 1:54 PM Lol : ).. Your last question puts a smile on my face..Sizzling passionku indeed : ) Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2015 at 8:06 PM Thanks Charmaine, hopefully I haven't been too naughty.

Miraj Raha October 19, 2015 at 9:27 AM errr....that was lot of passion.Sir Richard. Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2015 at 10:02 AM Thanks Miraj.

Demetrios Trifiatis October 19, 2015 at 9:15 AM Richard? Is that you? Haha! Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2015 at 10:04 AM Being a bit risqué, taking a page out of the Greek hand book.;0)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2015 at 8:20 AM ..... "In a dark room" ...with lots of candles :) .... a romantic write, Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2015 at 10:04 AM Good line Anne Lise.