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Passionately Yours,

Passionately Yours


         Hills of joy we rode ahead,
    Down the valleys sweet we buoyed;
         Like  river merging ocean,
              Solace I devoured.

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Poet Destroyer A

January 27, 2013 at 6:29 PM

Hello Mehnaz, stopping by to say hi, and read the dodoitsu poem again. still loving the gallop and swallow of your poem. with passion I hold on tight to your words.. always~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

January 8, 2013 at 7:57 PM

stopping by to read this one again... my favorite poem of yours so far... thank you for the soup-mail.. it pulled me on to the soup today... always~ LINDA

Mehnaz Veetil

January 8, 2013 at 9:15 PM

Thank you and lol for coming back.... I am glad you are here. Love n hugs , Linda.

Andrea Dietrich

January 1, 2013 at 10:04 AM

really lovely!

Mehnaz Veetil

January 8, 2013 at 9:14 PM

Thank you Andrea,

Debbie Guzzi

December 29, 2012 at 4:40 PM

so much inferred in so few lines..good job! Light & Love

Mehnaz Veetil

January 8, 2013 at 9:13 PM

Thank You,

Poet Destroyer A

December 28, 2012 at 3:15 PM

Mehnaz Veetil,, wow... this is a short form... but the best poem I've read all day... and believe me I've read over 100 so far.. many are good and awesome.. but none of them made me fall in love with the image..>LOL< I'm gonna say it~ my favorite image is ... devouring the comfort in the joyful path you are exposing with love... love this... so so much... always~ PD

Mehnaz Veetil

December 29, 2012 at 12:28 PM

Thank you Linda for your lovel comments....thanks for stopping by ....