Richard Lamoureux Poet Haiku

Passionate Haiku Contest

Picture one

laying side by side
Lips lost in pure ecstasy 
unaware of rain


Picture six

passion raining down
lips gorge on delicious neck
more than water rising

PD kissing in the rain contest

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Poet Destroyer A May 26, 2013 at 9:27 PM weeeee :-) PD

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 26, 2013 at 10:32 AM Well pictured. Good luck! AO Richard Lamoureux May 26, 2013 at 12:15 PM Thanks

Gautami Phookan May 26, 2013 at 6:58 AM Exalted passion and sumptuous lines!! Am drawn towards 'more than water rising'.. Great job done, Richard!! Richard Lamoureux May 26, 2013 at 7:54 AM I am glad you liked my little poems.

Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2013 at 12:38 AM what I love about these are the last line of each one. They rocked! Richard Lamoureux May 26, 2013 at 7:54 AM Thanks Andrea

Eileen Manassian May 25, 2013 at 10:59 PM Great minds think alike...yes..the same two pictures captivated me; however, I wrote about image six only. We can do that, right???? Of course...with that "more than water rising" I don't stand a chance.... ;) Richard Lamoureux May 26, 2013 at 7:55 AM Yes in fact I don't know if I have done it wrong by choosing two. Thanks for commenting Eileen.

Nette Onclaud May 25, 2013 at 4:12 PM peeling the layers of passion with tender and flaming lines.. womderfu;, richard!..:) huggs Richard Lamoureux May 25, 2013 at 4:25 PM Thanks Nette, hugs Rick

Manel Gunatillake May 25, 2013 at 10:31 AM with 6 lines passion rains . Thank you for the encourage on my ABC Richard Lamoureux May 25, 2013 at 2:34 PM My pleasure Manel

Timothy Hicks May 25, 2013 at 9:49 AM ... more than water rising... HMM! I will have to think about that (LOL!). Great last finishing lines in these... good luck! Richard Lamoureux May 25, 2013 at 2:35 PM Thanks, I had fun with these.