Passion Unfettered

PASSION UNFETTERED There is a force within a few that stands aloof, Jealously gazing at the eyes of lovers brimming with expectation, But something stays frozen-- in disjointed time, Afraid if the precocity of love is brilliantly returned. The truly beloved err, Like a force of nature the sweetness will be drained from the soul, Leaving a husk Withering Never to be regenerated. If this tale of passion is true We are helpless toys of a fickle god…. Who garners passing amusement orchestrating loss. If the action of love proves untrue, The Lovers are simply actors . Mouthing empty lines, Doomed are all to eternal isolation. Warily venture. the Blundering Hopeful Spiral dizzily from elation, Soul Splayed -- Adhered naked to the sullen earth Held by invisible stakes of humiliation and discontent. Alert for independent action Survivors swathed in stealth Endure silent screaming nights-- Appear Sleepless and Vacant. (but in truth, they are in constant vigilance—) Seeking the moment when a slash in time Will offer unknown hope Unfettered Escape At last-- And free to fly V. Anderson-Throop 2014©

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/30/2014 10:38:00 PM
Victoria, I so enjoy the versatility you bring to each piece. Your poetry is always exciting and new and gives one something to ponder. Your talent is busting through the grey clouds with an almost holy light. I love how you write!
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Date: 2/4/2014 9:51:00 PM
Connie, So happy to hear from you again....It is a gift to receive the thoughts of a reader.... Hope to hear from you again soon!
Date: 1/8/2014 4:44:00 PM
Beautiful Poem, Victoria. Deeply expressed with honestly that can be easily felt. Amazing imagery. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 1/24/2014 8:27:00 PM
thanks Jiril. I'm glad that the imagery reached you....and I will be happy to check out some of your new poems, too! V
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